I am loving this fic. Great work!

This chapter is amazing. The last four lines are so true.

I hope that despite the dearth of volunteers to be your beta reader this will not deter you from continuing this particular fiction and will continue to write. You have the skills and imagination. Breakthrough that wall and write on please.
Remember, why do you write?

Good Luck
(I think I might have written 'write' too many times heheh O)

I like this one - the subtlety of Luffy's uncertainties that can only be elicited when one has truly found the other.

Glad to see you're planning on coming back. I'm sorry that I can't offer to beta for you, but I bet someone will step up. Thanks for writing all that you have so far, by the way.

:)

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Well I remember how cute the story was, but I can't say I'm interested in beta'ing. I'm sorry!

Awww.. you're gonna stop?! :(((( If I know how to be a beat reader I will volunteer. but my grammar sucks too. :(( i want to see more of your stories esp this one.

You really got that dreary tone in this chapter. I could really feel it, especially in the beginning where you put so much description into just how far Nami had dived into it.

Thanks for the read and good luck with any future writing!

TwisterKirby

Aww they were really cute. I love the tittle i think it suits well to the story xD

Oh too bad, I will put you on story alert so I can know if you decide to keep with this series, They were short but sweet drables.

Keep writing

Awww...I like it. Especially the title. :)

This one is by far my favorite (besides the 1st and the one where AU Luffy and Nami are grocery shopping) Loved Straw Hat's perspective in this one!

This was great! I understood everything and loved the ending!

aw! that was sweet!