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that was adorkable.

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That was nice.

This was so good...I liked how you did it gradually, and not in one big bang. (:

Angellica

very nice story! Very cute!

Aww, that was really, really good and sweet and amazing and awesome. It made me tear up for some odd reason though. Thanks!

A very sweet story. Nice going.

Great story. You're a great writer. Wish it was longer.

Oh. My... Holy.. That was... This story...

Astonishing, fantastic, fantastical, incredible, wonderful, astounding, marvelous, phenomenal, prodigious, miraculous, unbelievable, wondrous stupendous, amazing!

So good! This so wins the fluff contest, no matter when it is. That was just... AH! OMG just... I can't even explain it.

How do I put this...? Um, if you gave me an update like this for every date you went on with Chuck Bartowski, I would be completely okay with it! In fact, I'd arrange everything. See what I'm saying?

This is the best back to school present EVER

Wow. Nice job. I liked how Sarah's feeling grew as she opened up. I also really liked the ending.

Loved it. :)

Wow, very nice job. ) Glad to see you put it out there.