 Mayleesa 10/11/04 . chapter 1*smiles* Very nice. Touching. |
 Titanic-HarryPotter-lvr 5/23/04 . chapter 1amazing. i love it. thanks. |
 Lil Rose Angel 2/18/04 . chapter 1This was so sad... I almost started crying... Well, that wouldn't have been the best thing to do, since I'm at my mom's office. Short(not really), sweet, and to the point. Sirius is always so loyal to his friends but I can still imagine him giving James those fireworks as a sort of a goodbye present. That just shows that he still retains his mischevious side. Great work, I LOVE SIRIUS FICS! |
 Templa Otmena 7/10/03 . chapter 1That was brilliant!
I love the way that it fits into PoA and how you depicted Sirius' character.
A perfect and powerful story!
Please keep writing more centred around James/Sirius/Remus etc- "Prongs Rides Again' is also fantastic...please, please, please write more! |
 Aly Teima 6/9/03 . chapter 1 Oh my goodness. What a beautiful little fic.
That totally touched me. I love anything James/Sirius centered, that was lovely.
It was so simple but real. Bravo
Please keep writing, it's wonderful
-Aly Teima |
 anon 10/25/02 . chapter 1 that was so lovely. i could cry. loyal to the end. wonderfully written. short and sweet. i loved it. thanks for writing something so nice. the readers on this site need more writers like you. you are a prodigy. thank you. Kat |
 Ezza the princess 6/3/02 . chapter 1wow this is very interesting- you are really amazing BrieflyDel. Greatest ideas ever! |
 RavenLady 5/8/02 . chapter 1*Sniff* This is amazing! It's one of those few fics that feels...alive. |
 Shandethe Sanders 3/18/02 . chapter 1Wow, that was great-really short and powerful. "A blast wherever you are" had me smiling in spite of myself. Very moving and sweet. |
 anon 2/2/02 . chapter 1 i like this fic, it was very touching. but i have a question-is godric's hollow really the place in the books, or did ppl on fanfiction just use that? |
 Aurora the Owl 1/25/02 . chapter 1I loved it...you are the best at these sorts of stories. I nearly cried. Keep writing, Briefly Del. |
 Crystalite 104 12/21/01 . chapter 1*speeechless* |
 anon 11/17/01 . chapter 1 OMG! That was sooo good! It was so much better than mine. Cept whos Hazel Watkins? |
 Little Alisimo didn't bother to sign in 11/11/01 . chapter 1 That was soooo good. I LUV Sirius fics. |
 Twix 11/11/01 . chapter 1THIS WAS AWESOME! I loved how it fit into the 3rd book so well! I loved it! Keep writin'! |