 Killer Intent 2008-08-25 . chapter 1Been a while, huh? Yeah, I just got back from the E.P. in Texas, so it took me a little while to read the whole of your story. And, unfortunately, I wasn't in a good enough mood for a while to read anything, not even my LOTR book.
I did, however, check recently to see if you've done anything for your fanbase here on , but I haven't logged onto the journal since I got back a week ago. Now that I'm going to school again; I registered and started last week on thursday and thankfully didn't miss tuesday because of Hurricane Fay (Isn't that a pretty name?); I'll start using my livejournal more often.
But anyways, back to your story.
I -still- haven't gotten around to this part or.. well, past the first ten chapters I think, so I'm behind; I don't plan on watching the Anime any time soon; but I'll keep checking it out so that I can keep up with your stories too.
I thought this one was nice, perfect for a little celebration fic and I'm glad to see you're still writing and even gaining inspiration to write.
I read the manga and I see how you write Tsubaki and Black*Star and I laugh, grin and chuckle every time. It's so easy to picture him acting up through your writing.
Her falling asleep was sudden, but it was cute that he calmed himself down a bit when she fell asleep against his shoulder. At first, I thought he was quieting down -because- she was asleep, and he didn't have any reason to 'show off' anymore. Heh heh, I always wondered if that was -really- the reason why he was acting like he was the best: because he wants to impress the girl he likes.
And anyways, I know and I'm sure a whole bunch of other folk's here on know that if I (they) want to read a good quality fiction, then I'll (they'll) look up DarkHopeAssassin. *Wink.* |
 SpiritualEnergy 2008-08-25 . chapter 1This was cute. I liked how you established that there was a war going on around them, but you still had Tsubaki resting on Black Star's shoulder because he's a soothing presence to her. I found that very nice. :) Like you've done before, you really shown that understand the characters, I think. Great work! |