I really like it! The writing is really unique (a mix of first and second person).

The characters stayed in character and the storyline was interesting. I just wished there was a little more!

Good job!

Huh. Interesting perspective.

Well...I liked it

Nice story!

OMG! This story is TOO CUTE..

I love it..I really did!

I wanted a break from the typical plotted, ridiculously happy and sometimes out of this world crazy stories to give Angst, tragedy and Drama a chance and I was overwhelmed!

I really like it!

I felt all fuzzy inside when Neji ran out and raised his jacket to shield them both from the rain! I wish that would happen to me..When i find a guy i like that is..

"I can't let you be my weakness. It's too bad you already are."

LOVE IT.

I love it!

It was, admittedly, a little choppy (like you said), but that really did add to the flow of the story. I can't say much more except that I thought it was written quite brilliantly.

are u kidding me, I loved it . call me weird haha

For something written in the middle of a lecture ... it's pretty damn good.

Neji.Is.A.Jerk

He could have stopped her!

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I LOVE IT though!

Awesome!

This is actually quite different from the stuff I've been reading recently...and I love it. Do write more fics in this style, will you? Pretty please? I love, love, love it.

Messy is good in this kind of stories. Haha! I lovelovelove it.

That was cute! I liked it!

@TEMARI@

That was fantastically heartwrenching. I actually thought this would go like most fics do - they get together and whatnot. But leaving the reader wanting more makes it a whole lot better - they tend to look into you prfile and read more of your fics. Great job!

I thought that was pretty cool. It wasn't really messy it sounded honest. It had great tone and you created visible setting. I could so picture them, their faces, the rain. I would love for you to do like two more shots to show Neji's reaction and then hopfeul a very very happy ending else folks 'round these here parts might be mighty tempeted to relaese abit of their frustration. SIKE...

no really you better do what I said and just so your not scared I'll end this by saying really really good job!

Hello, nice story, kind of sad, but very good. There's just one thing that bothered me, the line "Somehow annoying you puts meaning into my present." Present should be replaced with Presence. Sorry, that was going to bother me forever if I didn't point that out. XP