Wow, this is really interesting! I didn't realize it was AU until I started reading it, but I like it so far, especially how you portrayed everyone. Looking forward to more!

One word. Update. (please... soon?)

This is a very well thought out story, I"m almost temped to ask for permission to use some of your ideas for my own story such as Ryo maybe not being quite human and maybe a computer in the digital world that consumes all that come near it.

but aside from the obvious inspiration I cant wait to read what comes next.

You know what really freaks me out, after having read this (again)? The fact that you really can't argue against Garurumon. I mean, based on his view, that humans are like a "drug" and their partners "addicts" and whatnot, anything they say to him will be denied. Plus, the fact remains that it makes sense in a twisted sort of way. Goes to show that half-truths form a better deception than a complete lie.

Did I ever tell you I really, really like your version of Ryo? I mean, I think when I had first found your fic, I was getting so tired of not finding any WS Ryo fics that I just started browsing Tamers fics in general, and I came upon this little gem. But yea, I like snarky, cynical, pessimistic Ryo. And his side story. I think fangirls have a habit of torturing charas they like the best, so it's safe to say that, yeah, I really like the angsty part of his side story >_> (And don't forget the WonderSwan game references! *hugs*)

Again, thanks for the fic. Hope you update sometime in the future =D It'll be the treat of the day when it comes out. (On another note, I may drop other reviews / comments in other chapters ... maybe.)

I love your story. The characterization is great, the plot is fast enough.. and you really have improved. Over 8 years.

You aren't gonna update in 2017, are you? JK :-)

Do continue, please!

Nice to see the story back up and running =) coll - im still holding on to every word! =)

Hmm, I wonder what happened to Ryo in the past. Did he get this "X virus" that was mentioned? Did the same thing happen to the people in his dreams?

I'm glad to see Rosemon is still loyal to humans and the memory of her partner. The others definately need the help.

I wonder what's going on with Takato, if anything.

Cya!

Famira! I'm so proud of you! You finally updated! OMG, i loved this chapter. Yo did it so well. And... I was right about Rosemon! She is Mimi's Palmon! You know what'd be totally coolio? If Ryo was told that he was actually Taichi Yagami. That'd be so coolio! Anyway, I loved the chapter, and i've been sticking with this story for as long as I could. Oh, and Maskmon says "hi"!

Maskmon: Hi! It's good to see you updated!

Me: You know what'd be even coolioer? If you updated in, like, the next month or sooner! Mind you, I love your writing, and Maskmon and I are not always the most patient peoples/digimons in teh world. Good luck with the next chapter!

Know what else? I think that, when Jenrya rescues Black Growmon, Black Growmon should SO stay as Black Growmon, instead of just Growmon. And then he digivolved all of the way to ChaosDukemon!

Maskmon: Sorry, she's letting her mind wander. You can do it however you want to!




Yo
DD of B~ and Maskmon!
(DigiDestined of Balance and Maskmon)

Thank you for the update!!

One of the most infuriating lines ever, is "She told him everything" XD At least he knows now, though what he does with that information... I notice he hasn't talked yet after he and the others met up with Jenrya again. Thinking over what she said?

On another note, I'm surprised, yet not, that it was her (trying to keep the review relatively spoiler-free) that appeared to help, considering the crest. Is she an RK in the canon? I didn't recall she is, but canon changes sometimes... For a second, when you described her, though, I'd thought you were talking about Lord/RhodoKnightmon XD "Whoa, he went through a gender change O_o"

On another note, I really like how you melded different canons together. So far, it was only the first and third season, but now there's stuff on the X-virus too. I hope you do a good job incorporating everything, 'cause it'll be really interesting to see how this all develops =3

Hope you update again (preferably sooner than later, but whenver you can)~~ Thanks for the chapter and a great fic =)

What's funny, is I was just thinking today when you would update this again. I honestly adore this story and you should keep it up. Also, it would be nice to see more Digimon fanart from you. It's really nice.

Wow. This is a really interesting story! You've made the characters seem so real, so 3D like so unlike the 2D~ness of other stories. Very suspenseful and original. Looking forward to your next chapter!

It was wortha shot, but can you PLEASE get a move on with the real chapter. THis is the first time you've updated in a long time, (and the first time i've reviewed in a long time as well) but i really want to know what happens to Takato and Jenrya and BlackGrowmon. And Ruki (she'd kill me for saying i didn't), and Renamon, and Terriermon and everyone. Holy cheese and crackers hurry it up!

awesome. i thought you had quit writing or something.

Hello!

Heh, Yamaki and Impmon do make an interesting pair...if they can get past their grudges (easier said than done), then they could make a pretty good team. I dunno if I see them in a Tamer kind of partnership, but Impmon's slinking around could bring useful information to Yamaki.

Cya!

I'm amazed at the character development that you've placed within the story. The way Impmon and Yamaki both need to rely on each other in order to obtain revenge is very clearly shown, and yet the tiny emotions of genuine trust and caring are subtle. I have to admit, it's impressive, I knew that if I kept writing a review that started out as complimenting your writing style, well sure as shootin' you'd get hooked into reading it and then I'd be able to say this: GOOD LORD. I'm gonna be honest, writing styles are kind of like the "you are what you eat" deal, and you just went and gobbled down a big old sadist, didn't cha? I mean, Takato's merged with Juggernaut and has become a murderer? And worse, he turned his best buddy Guilmon into one as well?

And of course, then there's the reason for Yamaki and Impmon's sudden need for a team-off: you killed a little girl. Shame. I'm disgusted, sorry, I just am.

Now it would be one thing if there was some tiny hope, some sign that everything would be righted, but Takato's friends have no real idea what's happened to him, Kincaid and her evil associates have incredible control, and the only guy who has the best idea on what's going on is on the run with a rookie with a bad attitude. In short, there's almost no hope given. Yet for some reason I found myself unable to pull away from your story. Perhaps that means there's something masturbatory about reading depressing stories that show no light at the end of the tunnel.

I'm sorry if you feel that I'm being unfair, but at least I'm being honest. You can judge me if you want to, but there's a pattern in my work: the good guys always have at least one small edge that makes them stronger than the bad guys. In your story, I can't see the light. Sorry if that offends you, but I calls 'em as I sees 'em.

Sincerely...

Nick