I think if you made this into a story it would be very funny. But its up to you since it has been a few years. But if you do then I'd be a happy camper! )

I know it's been two years since you've posted this, but I just wanted to let you know that this has potential. I'd really like to read more if you ever decide to write more. This was both humorous and dark (no one likes being beaten in an alley after all). And, I have a feeling that a romance would be totally sweet!

Hey this story is awesome, you really have to carry it on. I've added it to story alert so please make it into a full fan-fic XD

cya...

LOVED this! It was very realistic and well done. Should really be a series though ;)

Nice! I'd be interested in more ;)

Hey,

I really enjoyed this chapter and the story so far seems really grounded and realistic. I would really appreciate it if you updated and continued with this story.

Thanks,

Jess

i'd love to see this grow into a bats/oc fic! lol, i like her a lot

bwoah, if you continue this, i will be a very happy person :D very intrigued at the moment, carry on with the good work :D

Hey, funny/cute!

DO IT! DO IT! DO IT! (imagine teenager jumping up and down in computer chair saying that rather hyperly and yes I am well aware of the fact that "hyperly" is not a word)

PLease please please continue it. Im sure more people will read if there was more chapters. that what I usually do. If it dosen't have more then one chapter I don't read it but I had a strange feeling about this that I was gonna like it and I did. continue and update ASAP!

More, please:-) It always brightens my day when a skilled author manages to let a bit more of Bruce slide into Batman.. -makes him more than a hunky guy in kevlar, you know;-)

I think you wrote something good. I did enjoy it a lot and I liked your girl.

I don't know if it will work as a longer story but who knows, you should try if you feel like it :D. Be well