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Urase Sha'den 6/15/05 . chapter 2
Hehe. Finally. Oih.

Well, might as well forget what I said about picking up where my browser left off.

Cool fanfic.

Keep it up!
Urase Sha'den 6/14/05 . chapter 1
BLAGH! My browser screwed up and now I can't read the rest of chapter 2 or review it.

It won't load past the part where Ryuko Saito and what's-his-name are talking: 'Especially when the actual funding for the research came from the next century or two in the future.

Although she had been getting slo'...

See?

Anyway.

I suggest making the generator girl a good guy. Well, that's my $0.02 worth.

Keep up the good work.

And, could you continue at the part I put down if I don't review Ch 2? Plz?
Reyne 1/19/02 . chapter 2
Woo-eee! Nice story! I hadn't really read it before (though, to tell you the truth it *had* crossed my mind to do just that). I'm just impacient and anxious to read more! It's quite entertaining! Keep it up!
Zatridi Kat 1/11/02 . chapter 2
This fic is getting interesting...

I hope you update the next chapters soon, I just can't wait! Specially because my favourite boy here is Kohji...:) and he's been given a lot of attention! Keep up the good work!
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