Great job!Really.I like it :)

I loved the first Midnight Show and this version is even more amazing. I started reading Goodnight Moon too, and its very good so far. When I have time I plan to read Villian. (:

I like this a lot. It's definitely better than the original. Your description and detail has improved a lot, it's definitely much clearer what's going on. I like how you wrote Brick as an abusive boyfriend, cause that's how he WOULD be. And wee crossdressing Buttercup. The whole ending makes me so happy x)

Brilliant story. I listened to the song too and it's pretty awesome. =)

now that's beyond great :D