love it add more soon!

I loved this, Please Please, Please, continue it. I really like the idea that AndreAIa has a brother and a past, so please don't end it here; write the continuation!

Do you know how CREUL you are beign now? SEQUAL. !

Shouldn't he be asking his little sister about her romance life? *hint hint* MATRIX

very touching...don't stop now

Oooh! Guess what! I like it, and although I don't think I've read the other version I think it's great that U R *not* going 2 kill everyone this time! Continue! Keep going! Preceed with the story!

whar the this sucks

I think you're right about it being a lot better now. Good work, and I hope to get to see some more soon.