For a I:30-in-the-morning-job it's pretty good. I love the way you write

I'm pretty sure the point is that the person is your soul mate.
But I don't care, because I was mostly cackling about Jacob being rejected by mother and daughter.
I'm not nice.
But it was a good story.

wow, that was awsome. You right with such detail, making sure not to miss anything important. I like how you explored the idea of a werewolf being rejected by he one he imprinted on. I love how you made Renesmee mention that she hated the nickname. Very good writing.

so sad.