I adore this story! It's hilarious and cute, I can totally see it happening...poor Demyx and his broken gay-dar! Well, thanks for making a freakin' awesome story!
-Cloudhop and Spirit

Awie! Yay DemyxXZexion! I want more though! i wanna know if Zexy wants his lemonade~ hehe. great story. and yea, it was a beast but it was amamzing.

LOL; that was the best ending to that that you could have come up with. ^-^

Loved it~

This IS one beast of a one shot...
I know must run to read your other fics!
:3

EPIC ONESHOT IS EPIC!

xD This is hilarious. Fic came reccomened by a very good friend, and I'm glad that I read it C: Love all of the fragrance names, hah xD

Lovely fic! A real pleasure to read~

I absolutely loved the fic, like I'm not even kidding. Its cute and has great comic relief, after all how much better can you get then Dory?

Random question though. Do you live in NY? Because I remember that my school did a play/musical of "How To Succeed" in the school year 07-08, but I'm not sure if the shirts were green or not though because I wasn't paying much attention...

ohmigosh!
this is amazing.
Dory as Zexy's mom was hilarious!

I am absolutely positive that I love you.

No, seriously. I'm just sitting here, every other sentence going, "I love you. (heart symbol with fingers) I love you."

(Yeah, I know: super!creepy, but I get that way when I play video games...and I happen to play video games much better if I take slash breaks.)

Lovelovelovelove your inclusion of Edmund, and Dory, and...god, all the puns are absolute love. Keep on rocking with your bad self!

Love,
The Cake Fairy

I have never laughed so hard at a fanfic in a really long time. Seriously, my parents and brother kept calling me crazy every other minute. You obviously intended for Dory to be a comic relief character, and although I haven't seen Finding Nemo in a while, I definitely felt like I was watching Dory all over again. She was great. The bits with Terra, Setzer, Ven, and Roxas where obviously comical as well and you did very nicely with it.

What I absolutely loved the most about this story was all the Disney/Kingdom Hearts/Final Fantasy references. I cracked up at the names of the colognes. I thought it was really clever of you, so props for that!

The interactions between Demyx and Zexion were both interesting and realistic, unlike what I've seen in other fanfics. You didn't overplay Zexion's well hidden attraction towards Demyx, and Demyx was just the right amount of oblivious to Zexion's intentions. You managed to capture their personalities really well, even for an uncommon storyline and I give you more props for that. I can't stand it when Demyx is overly stupid and Zexion is either an overly pretentious jerk or emo. Demyx's gaydar was hilarious.

All in all, it was a great one-shot, and I have to thank you for providing me with a great laugh.

Why, hello there!

It is by pure coincidence that I stumbled upon this amazing One-Shot.

Coincidence, as in: "I read a DGM writer's profile and your fic was listed in her Recommended Fics list." Unfortunately, I can't remember whose profile it was -palmface-

I think I totally love you (in a platonic way) for writing this. I laughed, chuckled, "Aww"'d, and so much more~!

And everything, from the the names to the plot, was very creative. I daresay that your writing is as good as Dualism's writing. Which means that I really love it and it was really enjoyable to read "How to Succeed in Business Without Really Crying." And it's Zemyx, nuff said.

You may certainly expect more reviews/fave alerts coming from me, as I've been checking out your stories' list and I've seen other interesting fics. :D

Have a wonderful day, and keep up the GREAT work~!

Sincerely,
Midnight Crisis

Cute fic! It was very well written and it made me laugh. Dory, written as a human (and as Zexy's mother no less), was great and very original.

Yayness for gayness! :3 Iove Dory for Zexi's mom. Genius.

omg there are so many characters in it and LOOK! there's Terra and Ven! -fangirl squeal-

ehem. forgive me. xD it's hard to not scream when you've got almost all of my fav couples in one fic. they just fit in there, and, well, i love it. :D there's even Dori and Marlin. lol. you totally cracked me up. xD

you are amazing!

I can't stop laughing! The last line totally KILLED me. XD

One of the best Zemyx one-shots I've ever read, I've laughed so many times in between so many random intervals I think my sisters think I might've gone insane from sitting in front of the computer for so long!

Anyways, that was brilliant, beautifully written. And I feel INSPIRED thanks to you. Very much.

I feel bad for Demyx, thinking his gaydar broke.

-snickers- Awh, poor boy.

Anyways! Thank you for this wonderful, wonderful story. It is a JEWEL in a pile of...well...you know what I mean.

And Dory, WINS! -owns the DVD for Finding Nemo-