Wonderful story, I read it a while back and keep hoping it will be updated. I really want to know what happened and what will happen. The plot is very intriguing and orignal. I hope to read more. Thanks for sharing all of your awesome stories

p.s.
I really love Ralph as a comic series and Writing Love. You create such interesting, lovely and fascinating backstories (and plots) for every one.

Oh, my gosh! I really, really, really hope that's you've got another chapter in the works, perferably really close to completion!

This story seems like a totally fresh approach to a genre that is a bit over done (even though I love it!). I can't wait to read more of it!

The writing style is close to being as intriguing as the plot, so kudos for that, as well!

Anyway, great start, more soon, please!

QueenKalasin

So far this story has befuddled me, in the best sense of the word. I am not sure who is who or what is what; I have my suspicions but I do not fully trust them. I am definitely engaged.

I love your writing style here and I eagerly await the next chapter.

"Yer killin' me, Smalls." But I guess that just means, as usual, you're writing a fic I can't turn away from even if I wanted to. Which I don't, though I have a feeling it's going to be a tough read regardless. ;)

Ooh, almost there!! And that was definitely Derek and Casey talking. That was their banter. It has to be.

Anyway, great chapter! Can't wait to find out what happened!! =]

Beautifully written, heart-pounding, nail-biting anxiety. I love this! Your writing flows like poetry. You foreshadow with giving much of anything away.

Great job!

you're killin me smalls! all this suspense and mystery and intrigue. for the love of god pleeaasee update soon!

Wow! This is intense, and I like it. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Wow. You are an amazing writer. I am on the edge of my seat wondering what is going to happen and what Edwin is going to say. I think I have the characters figured out, also. I can't wait until the next chapter.

-C

ok i think i know who everyone is. I have a feeling this will be an awesome story! can't wait for chapter 3!

Dean

My heart's in my throat. I think I can accurately identify the characters, but I'm still anxious to have that confirmed. Edwin's story will be so emotional, I can already anticipate it.

Excellent writing... hope to see more soon.
- arbitraryink

Really really need to see what's next with this one. As usual, (even though I've read this before) you've driven me crazy with suspense and I'm hoping we hear the full story soon.

Wow. Quite the intense intro. Very interested to see where this will go and who all the characters will turn out to be.

Here's a review for this chapter. :)

Again, the first time I read this (how long ago was that exactly?) I thought Edwin was Derek. Um...I really like this first chapter and can't wait to see where it goes from here, so I hope you get some inspiration for both this and IWAALF because I can't wait to read the next chapter for that too.

WOW.
Intrigued. Confused. Amazed. Fascinated. Nervous. Shocked. Excited.

Those are just some of the adjectives that could describe me at this point, after just reading this chapter.

Please update this one soon! :)