Very eerie and one of your best!

Very exciting!

Well done! I love gritty whump Rodney stories. :)

Very Hallowe'en-ish! :D

Really cool but what dous ooc mean.

astra

it is really good but maby put some breaks on sheperd hurthing rodney, but still really good (please exquse the spelling).

Astra

Hello Varda! I decided to read another chapter while I had some time. Unfortunately I don't have time for another one, but I enjoyed this chapter a lot! I really, really liked that this chapter was Rodney and Teyla heavy--that's a pairing (I don't mean romantic pairing when I say that but you know what I do mean, LOL) that we don't see very often. I think you wrote their friendship very well, and you had Teyla's voice down well too. Great job! Hope to be able to read more soon!

STRAWBERRIES! I WANT SOME!

That was a little odd no?

Ouch! That seriously must have hurt! Stupid Rodney!

Very, very cool! More please! I’d love to see a fic where the boys get into trouble with Elizabeth over the number of Jumpers they've lost! Tee hee hee!

Erm... you have them putting Rodney onto a backboard twice!


"...he moved them in to rest by the scientist on the board."

"...rolled the still totally unresponsive scientist over onto the backboard."
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"The medical team wrapped Rodney in blankets and strapped him down." ...Um, after he's already on the backboard?


Other than those things I loved this one!

Nice. i was hoping that you'd at least mention cake though...even if it is a lie.

I know that it goes against the grain but it would have been nice to have one where Rodney wasn't quite so battered (I know I can talk ;D) just covered in the juice & scaring everyone. That said I enjoyed the story (as always). debbie

Great one XD