naww how cute! i loved the title and how she calls him that :)

I love this story! It's brilliant! The first time I read it, it made me cry! I especially like when they're talking to Kim's dad; I can perfectly see that conversation, it's beauitfully thought out. And when she's doubting herself after he explains imprint. It's so moving. A lovely, goregous story! Keep it up!

Hi! i love your podcast! and this story is amazing! you should write more!

It shows the relationship of those who are imprinted on and those who do the imprinting. It givens more insight on what is going on on the other side of the lines. One love story that is short but amazing. Greatly written.

I have no idea why I never read this before, but I absolutley freakin love it! It's so sweet! Great job hun!

That was A-MAzing! You really should keep writing, yes, I know it would be really hard to continue writing this particular story since we know so little about the characters, but if you get an idea, or even just want to try and make them up as you go, fine with me. Or if you don't feel like you could do that, go ahead and make all the other imprintings too! LOL, plz try! (P.S. Your podcast... A-MAZING!)

This is a nice little one-shot. you have a few spelling mistakes but overall it was nice.
i was really loving it until you had Jared take Kim on date. you had such a nice base and starting - that was quite funny actaully - until you started with jared sharing his secret. i got lost and confused before having to back track and realize you just jumped forward in time.
personally, i think you could have done a story about this, going on and beyond there meeting and relationship. Kim was a relatable charactor and Jared was sweet and simple - a boy that every girl wants to have love her.
the way you shared his secret wasn't my favorite part. the whole dad at the door was good (my dad does that still with my boyfriend he's known for years) but the whole kim being surprised by the date was a little shocking. if they were hanging out and kind of going out, a date shouldn't shock her.
the whole meadow thing was a little over the top and almost exactly like Twilight. i know you're more creative than that. judging by the beginning of your story you're really fresh and orignal. it didn't sound like you. it was too... gooey? does that make sense? your style was very clean cut in the beginning and then it turned into something of more of a chick flick type of feel. i'm not saying this out of meanness or anything! i loved your clean cut style and this different flow to your writing wasn't like you.
this has a lot of potentail. i'm looking forward to seeing more of your work and actaul stories. you have some good ideas. (:
keep writing, hun.

THAT had to be one of the best! I loved it! keep going! :)

Are you going to update this story?

that was beyond adorable. bravo!

I liked this, really. I haven't read any other fanfics other than Cullen-related, so I'm pleasantly surprised. It seemed a bit quick and there were a few grammar errors, but overall, it was good. It's very sweet and tender. Nice work!

Mizra (aka Sammie™ from MySpace)

That was so sweet, it was beautiful so sweet I loved it, was so romantic I loved it

but..but..u can't just make it a one shot!...that's sad.
I luved btw...

Aw! That was so cute! You should continue it!

This was so amzingly good! You should definatly keep writing!