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Reviews for: Breakdown
Raven3182
2008-11-12 . chapter 1
This was different and good. I liked the fresh take that you put on one of the old staples of the Superman story. Great job!
gab4eva24
2008-09-29 . chapter 1
Hilarious! I loved how Lois just broke down in the end. Her comments on him just acting were hilarious. Also the comments on him not being tired 'cause he was Superman was funny too. The gun reference was funny too. Please continue! I want them to actually talk about it. That'd be fun. Update ASAP!
T-lo
2008-09-19 . chapter 1
A very cute and funny story. I loved the roll of toilet paper at the end!

That Lois is a clever one ;)
Anarra
2008-09-06 . chapter 1
that is just hillarious
Mysterious Prophetess
2008-09-06 . chapter 1
Very clever and funny.
MP
Dannie Tomlinson
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
*Snickers* I've already read this before but couldn't review... You gotta love Lois' determination. Loved this.
Bellarata
2008-08-27 . chapter 1
oh this was awesome! LOVED the ending!

I'm nervous though because there are some definite similarities to my 12 days of clois fic that I am getting ready to post. But I started writing mine a few weeks ago, before I read yours so just know that is a coincidence!
Mark C
2008-08-26 . chapter 1
That certainly was an ingenius plan that Lois had. I can see why she did this and her feelings about why Clark never told her about his 'secret'.

I don't know when Clark figured it out but when he realized what Lois' plan was, his reaction was great. He denied being Superman easily, that's probably due to years of practice.

I really enjoyed the gun references here, nice touch.

The ending was very good and the 'peace offering' was great.
d
2008-08-25 . chapter 1
Absolutely hilarious!
JamesTKent
2008-08-25 . chapter 1
Cute! Nice reveal, interesting take on it -- too bad he -wasn't- there when the earthquake hit, eh?
andreabc
2008-08-25 . chapter 1
...toilet paper :) that's our Superman, ever so considerate...
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