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Reviews for: Surprise!
Midnight Hikari
2009-08-18 . chapter 1
Cute story! I really found it all adorable. But the said thing is...His birthday is on the day school returns! -gonk- XD Still, I liked the story.
agreywriter15
2009-02-02 . chapter 1
Kawaii! I luv the gift that Yakumo personally gave Mushra.
Your story inspired me to write something for Valentine's Day on February!
I'm going to make it Shinzo! (whe...)
lol
Mushra the enterran
2008-10-22 . chapter 1
i liked it but that means he is two years older than me. I like mushra!
CerberAsta
2008-10-05 . chapter 1
A fairly good story with a few grammatical errors. I admit that the gift description was a tad long. Mebbe just glance over it, instead? Something more along the lines of:

"Gifts were given, and it even turned out that his hoverboard breaking was part of the gift, so to speak. Sen and Rei had taken out the battery so that Mushra would leave it alone long enough for them to give it a paint job, as their gift."

Other than that, it was perfectly IC and an all around good fic.
mogwai1988
2008-09-02 . chapter 1
So cute!
I love little ficlets like this.
celestial writer
2008-08-29 . chapter 1
Wow. I had a feeling it was his birthday though i didn't expect it to be on the same day you would submit this. It's really good.
Jade Angel Phoenix
2008-08-29 . chapter 1
A real cutie story but how in the hell did you find out that his birthday was August 25?
littleseren
2008-08-28 . chapter 1
Cute and really well written! The YxM was just right and not overdone at all, I loved it
Airiko-the-Angel13
2008-08-27 . chapter 1
Oh...my...GOD!! NO ONE TOLD ME AUGUST 25 IS MUSHRA'S BIRTHDAY!! EEP!!

I absolutely LOVE this!! LOVE IT!! Oh, and where the heck did you find out when his birthday was? I've looked everywhere for stuff like that and I never find anything.

HAPPY LATE 16TH, MUSHRA-KUN!! ^^
*gasp* HE AND I ARE THE SAME AGE!! YAAY!!

TOTAL FAVE!! YOU MADE MY DAY SO MUCH BETTER!!
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