Excellent story! It was very well writen, and the description had me on the edge of my seat, even though I knew what happened! Thomas is my favorite character in that movie, and this story brightened my day emensely. Thanks for sharing!

A great story. Very good.

Great fic! Once again, it was refreshing seeing Thomas' perspective on a certain event in the movie. I liked how you described Thomas falling into the ocean and him being tossed and turned in the ocean. Also, your bit of humor at the end was a nice touch. :)

Good job. I wouldn't have thought there was much to write about in this brief scene, but you did a good job with it. :) I liked the little joke at the end, where John thanked him for making him look good.

This was a great re-telling of the scene from Thomas' POV. He will always be my favorite, and I think you did a great job of capturing his overall character. Also, the imagery was very well-done, I actually could picture the storm and feel some of the terror Thomas felt as he was drawn further away from the boat. Thanks again for a delightful read!

OMG, I loved this story!! It was awesome, well done!
Is it just me, or did I detect some hinting at Thomas/John? r, Thomas having a bit of a crush on him? Awesome story no matter what!!

Sorry this is so late moving and graduate school makes for little time. I loved the whole "No making me look good." This was very well done and good to see a somthing not over done.