Wow…the beginning was deep. It reflected quite nicely the society we live in now. Why is it so wrong to think that a boy and a boy, or a girl and a girl, could fall in love at first sight just as a boy and girl do? It is a very good question to ask. I don’t care how many people tell me that it’s wrong. I don’t care how many religions or religious people tell me the bible says God hates the gays. I don’t care if they tell me it’s in the bible! If there gonna say that, then prove it to me! Show me the passage where he says he hates them! Isn’t there a passage that says he loves us all? Then tell me, dear friends, where did you get the impression that he hated them? He created them did he not?

Anyway, on another topic, I’m glad you made Naru a writer. It fit’s him, somehow. Or maybe it’s just the story that made it fit? Oh gawd, it stabbed my heart when Naruto recognized Sasuke…And damn did it break my heart completely when he said he’d come to invite them to his wedding. I could feel Naruto heart’s shatter, and Sasuke’s when he realized what he was giving up by telling him of the wedding. When he saw his friend once more…his love.

‘But if such things prevent true lovers from loving then that is what really breaks me up inside.” Gawd, what a great last line. I loved this, a good angsty fic . Great job once again Brumal.

♥Midnight Mourner♥
♥They'll never♥
♥know who I am♥

Oh my God... Why is it that the best fanfics, are the always the most underrated ones? This was truly a masterpiece. Loved it.

Wow. It's just... Wow. This really was beautiful. Heartbreaking, and oh so true. I wish I could say something more, something that could say how much this story moved me, but I can’t seem to find words strong enough. Let me just tell you that I’m gaping at my computer screen, my throat constricted, my eyes watery, my heart clenching painfully. Yeah, angst and romance with a wonderful writing such as yours have this effect on me. Thanks for this story. Awesome, really.

I can see why this is the kind of fic that would be very important to you. Let me say simply that I'm captivated and definately will look out for the next chapter. Good luck with this.

Hm, now why does this remind me of a poem I once heard...? xD I love it! And now I want to cry...because having to read something as sad as that not once, but twice, is simply heartbreaking T.T (I will not cry, I will not cry, I will not cry) Success! -hic-

But really, I'm glad I got to read this...Very happy indeed. I enjoyed your poem that was similar to this situation, and being able to read it more in detail is really...really rewarding for some odd reason. It's like reading it in another person's eyes and seeing it in bright, vibrant colors--no matter how much I want to see Naruto go to the wedding...Couldn't have a SasuNaruSasu story without the angst, huh? X]

And the beginning--MAN, the beginning. It took all of my willpower not to invite all of my friends over and flaunt how amazing I was for finding something like it. And if I'm amazing for FINDING it...then what does that say about you, hm? It just means you're a heck of a lot more brilliant than a handful of writers that are out making 'best selling' books. Really, you've gotten better from your usual amazingness(X.x not a real word)! Now you're just...I don't know. But it's good.

Well, anyway, that ends my ridiculously long rant that has almost no significance ^^; -hugs you to death- AWESOME ONESHOT! -love-

~dOOdle

Oh my lord. That was simply beautiful. I'm serious. I could feel the raw emotion in that and you had me on the verge of tears. I can't express how much i loved it, and it kinda fits with the Naruto storyline in a wierd way. Like some people see Sasunaru as sick and wrong so they pair them up with Hinata and Sakura because they're girls, without even thinking if they make sense as a couple. And it's just so wrong! T_T *cries and hides in corner, gives 2 thumbs up.*

Insane M.N

I have the impression that Naruto was specifically writing abt Sasuke & him - when the sadistic side of fate struck.

Since it's personal I would think it had happened to you or someone very close to you, I sincerely wish that either of you would stay strong & that u can get through this ordeal :)

Wow nice story i really liked it naruto was just writing that on his laptop, he sees sasuke and hes going to get married...sad anyways good job i liked the story