AW! I loved it. This is the kind of story that makes me like Lois. haha.

Great job, just like always. )

KPL

Oohh! Loved it!

"Bruce decided to make everyone happy." - That was too good!

The fic was more utopian than realistic, but that's exactly the kinda stuff I like to read! :D

& don't worry, I have pretty much the same "super couple who perfectly express everything that is lovely and good in a romantic relationship" take on BMWW, & I'm surprised EVERYone doesn't :)

Hope to see you update "Strangers in Paradise" soon! (& plz write a 50,0-word chapter at least!)

A credited chapter that makes for a good ending to this story. You have a way with words that make for a entertaining tale. And the ending was cute. Bravo to the lady with the stunning hair!

Nice end to a nice story. The only criticism that I can give is that I would have assumed that Batman would have figured they were dating by then, you know "world's greatest detective" and all. It is very Bruce Wayne to leave the party to make out with the hottie, and now Batman gets to really do it!

nice way to end it. though if you decide to end it in chapter 3 it will be good too.

nothing to say in this final chapter than good job on this piece (_)

I love where your creativ juices are taking this story! Please update as soon as you can! I'm on the edge of my seat and about to fall off! lol Great story!

THAT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER!

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this is realy a great story. Usualy i dont like SMLL storys but this on is realy good. I like all characters so far, even Lois. thanks. Update soon.

Quite cute. Always go for the geeky boy.

Well, I am not the foremost expert on Clark and Lois, but I think you did a good job. I'm also really happy you did this sorry, since Mr. and Ms. Lane are my favorite couple right after Batman and Wonder Woman. Keep up the good work, please.

This is simply spectacular! You write very well, and speaking as a life-long Superman fan, you seem to have a good grasp of the characters. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Please keep writing SMLL!

I'm so glad I wasn't eaten by a bear. :D Phew! Yay for bear-free camping.

I really enjoyed this chapter! I found Lois adorable and I found myself secretly rooting for the vocalization of being a couple and her reaffirming (or rather, realizing) how she feels about Clark.

It's so cute! And you've written each character perfectly.

I cannot wait for the next one! )

omg I'm totally hyperventilating over here.

What an amazing chapter. I loved it. I loved everything about it. I had to keep wiping my eyes so I could read it!

Good for you, Lois, good for you. And Clark... it was so wonderful. The first part of the chapter had me screaming "No!" over and over, but then it just got better and better until, at last, happiness. Sunshine. Clark. sigh!

I do kind of wish Lois had told Clark that she liked him BEFORE she figured out he was Superman, but, the way you did it all at once here actually worked really well. After all the little things she'd been noticing about 'the guy who'd been hiding in plain sight', it just made sense for her to figure it out. So yes... wonderful job. With everything. I loved your descriptions of Clark (drool...) and I think you got Lois's personality perfectly right. I just don't even know how to tell you how much I loved this chapter!

You are a master of romantic writing. THANK YOU so much for writing this!

U made me simpathetic for Superman...

I hate u...

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I really dont want this fic to end, just for the simple fact that for once it's Clark and Lois who has the releationship issues and not Bruce and Diana...

I just loved that!

And yes I loved the BMWW chapter, I just cant get enough of them.

Back to Marcio's voice, last time I sent u a youtube link, but i dont know why it didnt go. Maybe has a link policy that i'm not aware.

Anyway here's the link again

br./watch?vAni86MSB-x4

If it doesn't appear again, search for this on youtube "Liga da Justiça Sem Limites - Esta Porquinha (Parte 1)"

Kisses Nanda

You've got a well-written story here, no doubt you are aware that you are a talented writer. As for the subject of your story, I found the chapter on Bruce and Diana a little too saccharine for my liking (it was almost not believable). This chapter is written to be much more "realistic" and you handled the pacing of revealing Clark's identity to Lois rather well.