great chap. but next chapter better center around Batman. hehehe

Good Work

that's sweet of BM & WW to get Clark & Lois together

This is a pretty cool story, I'm getting into this!

You are on my Author Alert list. You have yet to disappoint!

As always, Lois shot poor Clark down. Why I'm not surprised? I wonder, when Superman will start avoiding her because of that?

THIS story... just...

ZOMGglee!OMG!loveCLARK! *passes out from over-fangirling*

*revives*

I swear to God I fell _out_of_my_chair_ TWICE while reading this! My tiny concrete dorm room here was built to withstand rockets and mortars but not the amount of fangirl love that just exploded in here

Because I

LOVE

THIS

STORY

!

I promise I'll leave a more coherent review in the next chapter. Just please know that you are doing EVERYTHING right and it's SO PERFECT IT'S KILLING ME AND I MUST HAVE MORE! *melts*

Clark IS the nice guy and NO! ! ! ! ! ! ! LOIS! WHY! AGH! *runs in circles* why do you do this to Clark it's not fair he loves you and you have to love him back *sobs*

Very touching. I liked this quite a bit; I cannot wait for the next installment.

Sorry I didnt answer before, but college is back. And God I need vacation...

But about our last talk...

Hope u could check Marcio's voice.

And Cristino, I have sure seen him (yummy).

But Brazilian and Portuguese's accent are different like American and British, acctually the difference between Portuguse's accent are bigger than English, but u can still undersant them with no problems...

Now about the story...

I not a big fan of Superman, in fact, I dont like him at all.

I blame his fans. They are so stupid they can only see his strengh. All they say is "Oh Superman could beat Batman with a just a flick" or some stupidity like that, but I think I'm been to harsh on the farm boy.

But I did like your idea and i cant wait for more. Hopefully it will have lots of BMWW fufflyness (is that even right?)

I'm going...

Sorry about any grammar mistakes but it's already 2 am and i have to be up at 7.

Kisses Nanda

nice

Apples and apple trees are great! Thanks! :D I also like green apples too.

Despite the fact that Lois isn't usually one of my favorites, I really like this story and I like how you've portrayed her. I also feel for her. Poor thing! What a traumatic experience. And good ol' Clark, he's right there for her. If only she could just get over herself and settle down with him. I actually like the SMLL pairing (if SM isn't with C-lady... I kid! I kid! Or do I?). They make a cute couple!

At least he won't be with Donne Reed. That sounds kind of bland for our favorite krypton. Which reminds me, I've been wanting to watch It's a Wonderful Life.

I'm looking forward to more. :) And, you guessed it, BMWW FTW!

you did a good job with this- i like sups with lois - i like her on the justice league shows- now i can't wait until you do the BMWW chapter- teehee

Awesome!

Hope you have Diana/Bruce talk to Lois about it.

Post more soon!

The problem that he has is that unlike Batman/Bruce, he really is more Clark than Superman.

Not many people do Lois Lane stories, and I hope you continue this.

melt? no. dig a hole? yes.

It's good to see some fresh story other than BM/WW. But there will be BM/WW on this story, right?

and damn, you made a really good impression on this one for me I was tempted to ask for you to postpone Stranger in Paradise and continue on this first before that. just, please continue this, I really like it

Yor really should give yourself more credit because I loved it. As I've said before, there is not much on the clois pairing in this forum, so I'll take what I can get. It may not be your usual BM/WW fic, but it was still wonderful to read. I think my heart broke along with Clark. Can't wait for your next update!