AW! this is so ssad!

I had read a couple of your other stories, and so when a stumbled upon your lookup again, I got right excited and started to read every story you have on there.

And must I say, it's almost terrible what a wonderful writer you are. I love your ideas, plots, the way you put such perfect emotion into the characters. I find myself becoming drawn in by each and every one of your works.

Needless to say, I was a little shocked to find such a short little fiction on here, but loving all of your works before this, I decided to read it anyways. Must I say, it touched me. It was just so touching, I almost felt connected to it. One of my dear friends just suffered the loss of her boy friend, and showing the song, Almost Lover you mentioned at the beginning made her so emotional. But I think it was good for her to find such a nice song to fit the way she feels, she has been feeling better since showing her this. And me, knowing about the situation, listening to the song and reading your amazing work brought me to tears.

Bravo.

sniff, that was really bittersweet. my eyes got watery. poor sasuke. really good one shot

so butefull this story made me cry for real and my sis came in andasked me if a was insane or somthing but never mind that

That made me cry...
It was written beautifully.

YOU MADE ME CRY!
I don't cry.

Thank you.

Poor Naruto and Sasuke!

Pretty good.And angsty.Poor Naruto.Sasuke.
Its like Asuma all over again...x cept Narutos not pregnant...Very good 2 thumbs up.

Wow. This was heartbreaking. I still get choked up when i think about it. It was so simple and yet that is what made it so good. You have some serious tallent.

omg, i had tears running down my face! this is so sad!! poor sasuke, never haven gotten anything he really wanted. life is so unfair!! wa!

anyway, very heart-wrenching and well written. good job! XD

I thought this was a sweet and heart wrenching tale of what Sasuke and Naruto's life would be like if they were in love and Sasuke died. Even in death Sasuke wouldn't leave him and Naruto would be the overly emotional one even in a tradgedy situation. keep up the updating. As soon as I can I plan on reading your updated For My Pride and Your Promise. I really enjoy your stories there so realistic.

God
being on the bane of womanly existence right now
and then reading this story
I'm a bawling baby
*sniff*
I like it alot
very much so
*bawls some more*

I cried while reading this. And i was listening to Almost Lover too. It's a nice song. Anyway, nice one-shot! :D

*is on the merge of tears* that is so cute, and sweet at the same time...it's realy heart toutching and very heartbreaking at the same time ='] a beautiful story.

keep writing =']
*sniffle*

~Soulkeeper.

Agh! Angst!

And another great piece from you. ^^ I can feel how Naruto hurts inside too, and that Sasuke still remains as a soul to accompany Naruto, even though Naruto can't see him. So, so sad. Yet so wonderful at the same time.

Good job! =D (I'm the first to comment? WOOT! XD)