Heeheehee, sehr sehr lustig. (very very funny)

my god that was bloody hilarious!

*cackles* Perfect ending! XD

Oh, Herry!

LOL!

AHAHAHA! Not only entertaining - but funny too! Completely great job (Neil has to walk! Ha! Ha!). I can't wait for more! A sequel to this would be good - I like the idea of focusing around Herry. Not many people to that, so it was a change.


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Aahahhahaa that was awesome! I love reading these little stories of the team being normal teenagers. Highly entertaining and great characterisation! Lepi xo

Hahaha, Poor Herry. Oh yeah, Neil will walk that's for sure, hahaha.

that was awsome! wow, Herry's lucky he didn't have me in the truck along with everyone else, he would have cracked after two minutes! I can talk non-stop, and would probably be rambling on loudly, getting whoever I could to listen... but you probably don't need to know all this. Anyways, I LOVED IT! Great job!

lol, that was really funny. I feel so sorry for poor Herry, having to drive this dysfunctional little family around everywhere. Neil was hilarious!

I loved that! Neil's last line made me burst out laughing. I feel bad for Herry. And Archie. And I can just imagine Archie and Atlanta signing at the top of their lungs in the backseat while Herry gets more and more annoyed. xD Great job!