I wonder if she reaized that the hair he gave her was for her, and not for someone else. XD

I loved it! So clever and cute. A pity that none of the Senpais were included, but hey, if you'd added them, I have no doubt that poor Tezuka would have been wearing a swimming cap, no matter how ridiculous he would look. (Maybe he's one of those that MAKE is work??)

He's too proud to let just ANYONE have his hair. Or maybe he'd play Superman and accomplish the impossible: Dodge every girl who came after his hair. XD

Best of luck on all of your other works!

Wow, you are an incredible writer! I swear, there are metaphors are everywhere!~ XD
Interesting thing about hair. Never heard about that. Very innovative plot, but the ending seemed a little blunt and dry (not that I could do better >//<)
Keep writing!

I LOVED this story so much it was truly amazing. I am glad that the story is realistic and true to each of the characters personalities

I enjoyed your story. It was a bit weird during the part where Sakuno passed out though. There needed to be more urgency in getting her help. Good story, nonetheless. :)

Heh. Couldn't stop snickering, imagining banners and posters with a bald Ryoma. Priceless.

"...Maybe because I'm **," AHAHA THAT WAS THE FUNNIEST LINE ANYONE COULD EVER MAKE RYOMA SAY. i was dying :D
you had a lot of...interesting ideas (in a good way), and i love your writing style, but i think you could have made it a little shorter. whatever, i still loved it.

You changed the title. It was 'Wisps of Potion' before... Nah, never mind.

The plot was so original! Like, whoa.

I loved the last part. *thumbs up*

o god i love it so much xD pulling hairs out xD n da last part! da piece is perfect :D and lol i rmb ur other stories xD n i love every one of dem xD ah hope u'll update n write more :)

cool story,

write more ne,

Ah the camaraderie among boys! "He knew that they knew." I so love that part as well as the whole story! I always thought that even people out of the tennis club would notice that Ryoma and Sakuno have a thing for each other! I love the way you portrayed Ryoma and Sakuno! Totally in character yet still fluffy and sweet and wonderful! I also commend the "She always comes back concept" which is only too true. It also shows that Sakuno's stronger than what people give her credit for. Great job! May you write many more wonderful RyoSaku works!

everyone was totally IN CHARACTER! ;)
it was awesome! :D
great job! :)

ZOMG, I loved this. Love, love, love. Thank you!!

I really, really liked this. The plot was definitely original, and it kept me laughing throughout the entire story. Poor Ryoma. It really is shocking he didn't go bald. I wonder if that's why his dad doesn't have any hair - he lost it all to fangirls.

Everyone was perfectly in-character, a nice surprise. It's pretty difficult to find someone who can get Ryoma and Sakuno together without breaking into OOCness, but you did it very well. Wonderful job =D.

My favorite part was probably towards the end, when Ryoma realized that they all knew. "Then he saw that Horio was looking at him. Along with about half of the boys in his class, all fighting to keep their faces solemn. And he knew." The poor guy *giggles*

Fantastic job, and I'm looking forward to reading more by you!

LMAO That was freaking awesome, lemme tell ya. I love how Ryoma wasn't all "I love you I love you -insert fifty-million cheesy lines here-", but was more in character :)

Thanks for writing this awesome story!

A very poignant piece. This made my day. =3 Could do with a somewhat more thorough proof-reading, though.