Wah...So cute --
its good to see sketchbook fanfics.
the fact that theres little change in the plot makes it a good series to write about.
going to read more now ^^

Please post the next chapter, I can't wait to see what happens :)

Great story! It's nice to see another Sketchbook story out.

GAH!! Why's you do that? Bring out the next chapter soon! Love the couple though

Aw! I love Sora and Daichi together, you've done a good job~

HOLY ** I JUST READ THE REST OF THIS

This story is unbelievable, you are completely insane.

lol

the ownage level of this story...astounding

I like how your story is coming along and it's always good to see fanfiction written for Sketchbook. You also manage to keep everyone in character, which isn't easy in a Sora x Daichi story.

Sometimes the pacing leaves the reader bewildered with how quickly the situation changes. The same can be said about character interactions in your work - normally, there are five stages that a human mind uses to defend against unwanted developments: Denial, Anger, Bargaining, Depression and Acceptance. We don't always go through all of them, and there's no space in a story to describe all those feelings separately, but your characters jump from a spark of anger to begrudging acceptance immediately when conflict occurs. That feels weird.

Not many people review in the Misc. Anime section, but don't get discouraged. It's a work worthy of being completed. Best of luck writing!

~ Cytrus