 J-rocklover 2008-10-16 . chapter 1oh wow!
It's just like the song. |
 elmo 2008-09-10 . chapter 1 i luved omg it was great reminded me of lexii |
 Frenchie-chan 2008-08-27 . chapter 1Okay, first of all:
Havoc sulking in corner = epic win.
It was very desscriptive, perhaps too much so for my taste, ahem... I like the bit about the cherries. And Roy's COUGHCOUGHthreesomeCOUGH was...brilliant. |
 CreativebutLazy 2008-08-26 . chapter 1"Kiss Sheska again, it was freakin’ hot!" yeah I bet he thought it was. pretty good, it was kind of funny too:)(great, now I got that song stuck in my head) |
 edxwin is cannon!!! 2008-08-26 . chapter 1 ha! I really dislike yaoi and yuri, but this rocks. Lecherous ed...why is it that guys think girls kissing girls is hot? I really don't get that...great story. |