 Elizabeth.M.Kelli 2009-06-01 . chapter 4This is a very cute story! The best part is that I've only found one misspelled word!! That's very rare in fanfiction, even mine...My friends are always getting upset with me because I have bad spelling and grammer in my writing...Despite spellcheck too!!
If you're wondering what the word was you misspelled conquer, I believe you wrote concor, it was in chapter 2. |
 Chia Chia Rei 2008-11-23 . chapter 31cute. I'm being forced to read against my will, so I don't have nearly as much time on the pc now. |
 chocolatecheese08 2008-11-15 . chapter 31whoo!! go quick updates XD poor karin T-T please update soon!! |
 Shuurin-chan 2008-11-15 . chapter 31Aww... I didn't get to review your last chapter! Such a quick update...
Anyway, Karin-chan's letter WAS very sweet^^ But poor her, she's so lonely! I hope Hime-chan will go back soon so Karin-chan will feel better. Unless she doesn't want to, then I really can't do anything about it XD
- Yume-chan |
 chocolatecheese08 2008-11-14 . chapter 30YAY!! micchis back =] yeah go hime-chan!! memorize the lines!! XD please update soon!! |
 Kiana-tan 2008-11-14 . chapter 30That was so cute! |
 chocolatecheese08 2008-11-06 . chapter 29LOL I read twilight too ^^ the poem was...uh... interesting @_@ please update soon!! |
 Miu The Princess of Nature 2008-11-06 . chapter 29Yay! The first time I've reviewed! Yay! Continue. |
 Shuurin-chan 2008-11-06 . chapter 29Whee~ Update ^^ Yes, yes, Hime-chan is a great nickname(that's actually what I call her). Go Hime-chan, memorize your lines! You can do it! Hehe... Oh, and I'm not going to comment on that Derrin thing; sickos is right, Hime-chan! Okay, I'm getting addicted to the name "Hime-chan" now...oh well. By the way, the poem is not that bad; Micchi does rhyme with sweetie... ^^;
Update again soon (even though you just updated)!
- Yume-chan |
 Chia Chia Rei 2008-11-05 . chapter 28Cool... not bad... LOVE MICCHI! |
 Air Gemini Star 2008-11-04 . chapter 1this story...uh...i mean diary is creative! keep up the good worl ^^ |
 chocolatecheese08 2008-10-30 . chapter 28lol micchi was in england poor himeka ^^ please update soon!! |
 Shuurin-chan 2008-10-29 . chapter 28HE WAS IN ENGLAND? *Sniff Sniff* Was he there to see her? Maybe he was worried that she'd freak out ^^; Or maybe that HE'D get nervous? Aww... poor Hime-chan... She's sad because Micchi doesn't like her...? But I have a feeling that she's in for a big surprise ^^ Don't worry Hime-chan, Johonson-san and Micchi's fangirls will not harm you! Or maybe they will, since it's a story and it's not mine ^^; ... SHE GOT HIM A BEAR! That's so cute~ Now Shiroi-chan will also have a friend! ...Sorry, got a little overexcited.
By the way, about the Mangafox thing I told you, I guess it is the same as Onemanga...
It's not a late update at all! Only been a few days (like 2) since your last update. You just update too quickly >.< Not that I don't like it, of course, updates are awesome ^_^ That's why, update soon!
(Long review isn't it?)
- Yume-chan |
 chocolatecheese08 2008-10-27 . chapter 27LOL I go on onemanga too ^^ im not a big fan of dubs either unless they keep all the original dialouge and also the original plot XD I mean look what happened to the anime One Pice when they dubbed it...they edited so the there was NO BLOOD... so technically in the English dub, they were invincible even if they got stabbed a numerous amount times XD ok eugh ranting ^^ please update soon! lol himeka as 280 lines more!! go himeka!! u can do it ^^ |
 Electric Banana 2008-10-26 . chapter 27Good job! This is a great story! I like how you make Himeka act out of character from the actual series. Her hidden life! Himeka is my favorite character in the series, and she kinda reminds me of myself. I can understand how she feels about Micchi. He is so awesome!! Keep doing what you're doing, and write more! X3 |