This story is absolutely wonderful! >w<
I hope you continue it CX

Pretty good so far :) Please update soon!

I love this story! Normally, the stories are all fluffy, with not much conflict between Marth and Ike, but this kind of story is better, I believe. Marth is so girly it's funny. XD

... I told myself... don't read this... don't read this in my head... guess what...

... I read it... and now I dun know what to think...

I think i'll just go to a corner... and crawl into a fetal position... yeah... that's what I'll do...

~Honou

Random smex. I can dig it.

Odori Odori Kakumei!
~YamiTenshi~

"Zelda and Mario" LOL


great chapter ;_;

Yay! I was SO excited when I saw you had updated! (:
Wow, Ike was quick
xD
Aw but a real sweetheart for saving his little princess
It seems like he's more lovesick than Marth. Oh no! Samus was watching! xD
Great job! Update soon!
You really know where to kill people on cliffhangers :P

Change the rating to M. The beginning of the chapter was most definitely rated M.

I liked the end of the chapter, though, with the fluffy lines about hurting hearts.

Wonderful chapter, but short and few/some mistakes, that I have to point out...

First off: If it was suppose to be yaoi-fluffy *, it should change the story genre in "M" than stay as "T". (There might be kids who might read this..)

Second: I love that top part but I think you need to make a little more details of it, if it's not too much to ask for. (But this is your story so I won't force ya. ^_^')

And what "errors/mistakes" I meant was when Zelda and Peach brought their parnthers, you put Zelda's name again instead of using Link and you spell Marth's name wrong, just to let you know.

But anyways, great job of this story! Looking forward to the next chapter!

☆ ~See You Soon~ ☆
~ Shadow Petal

I love the fiery passion. The steamy intimacy! The romance! It's all invigorating. I love how Ike's the dominant member of the relationship, frequently calling Marth 'princess'. It's an adorable way to depict the couple!

This is an enriching breath of fresh air, especially since the Ike/Pit pairing dominates this category.

*is looking forward to drown in fluff*
That was some sweet chapter! And not just the end, love the way you described that brawl match xD
I'll be waiting for the lemon ^^

XD Marth gave in too quick. I wanted to watch Ike lug the bags all around the store and through the parking lot. ^^ Okay, i'll be quiet. Another chappie well done. I look forward to your lemon! :)

That chapter was kinda cute. I certianly did like the end.

Did you say lemon next chapter? Oh, I can't wait!

Hahahaha... Yes, it does appear that Ike is gay... or at least bi. XD Then again, Marth is too, so does he really need to complain?

Hahaha, I expected Ike to say, "I fight for my friends" during the mall mobbing xD. I was slightly disappointed, but I guess the fluff made up for it xD.

Whoo~
Great apology Ike. I'm impressed he was actually acting like a gentlemen for some time. Until he got to Smash Manor.
xD
Oh my Ike, how devious. =P
I love this chapter!! It's so cute, he's finally not acting like a brute towards Marth.
Oh no! Why'd you have to end the chapter there! xD
Good job! Update soon!