 Dorothybertgmail.com 5/23/12 . chapter 69 Loved this Touching story. Thanks. |
 my-thyme 5/23/12 . chapter 68Really enjoyed this story. Thanks. |
 1853kaz 4/14/12 . chapter 69Hi Katie - reached the end again, and can't thank you enough for having the perseverance and inspiration to bring us this story. So satisfying on so many levels! It's an intelligent, thought-provoking, grown up Twilight. The magical essence is there, but you managed to shake it into full, gripping, heartstarting life. Hope life continues to treat you kindly. Cheers! :) |
 1853kaz 4/13/12 . chapter 53So lovely! Truly. :) |
 1853kaz 4/10/12 . chapter 34I feel for them both. The tentative outreach. You pull my heartstrings with the simplest expressions. It's a gift you have, truly. :) |
 1853kaz 4/10/12 . chapter 22I love the depth you've given each of the characters in their own right. They're flawed, they make mistakes and have misunderstandings, but it only serves to make them richer, more satisfying, more lovable. :) |
 1853kaz 4/10/12 . chapter 4Hi! I'm back for another read.. I know it's years since you wrote it, and you've probably moved on from all this stuff.. But this remains one of my favourite stories. So honest, the perfect balance of longing, adoration, regret, scepticism and hope. Edward is perfectly drawn - he just rings true. :) |
 MrsLanaS 4/4/12 . chapter 68You had me crying all the way till the end. Such a great story. I will start tomorrow re-reading it...this time to my husband. I've never shared fan-fic with him before now. It's just that good. |
 MrsLanaS 4/3/12 . chapter 49I keep thinking of Alice's vision. I keep thinking it'll start happening at any minute. Aah! It's driving me crazy with worry! |
 MrsLanaS 4/2/12 . chapter 30You have an amazing mind. Fascinating chapter. |
 grannydenninelli 4/2/12 . chapter 69I've just read this extra special story. I found out abut it via Facebook and a group for recommendations for completed ff. I've been reading Twilight ff for a couple of years now, and this piece of writng has been a standout for me with the quality of your writing and the contents of it as well.
Thank you so much for all of your hard work. |
 MrsLanaS 4/2/12 . chapter 21This was good, real good |
 MrsLanaS 4/2/12 . chapter 20Heart gripping. It made me weap in public. |
 MrsLanaS 4/1/12 . chapter 10I'm loving this fic. You've made a fascinating story. Even my husband is hooked and I'm just telling him about it. We can't wait to see the twist and turns that are bound to happen. |
 MrsLanaS 3/31/12 . chapter 3Oh my word! I've cried since the end of the first chapter. You had me crying, like ugly crying! Even so, I like a story like this. I'm looking forward to where you're taking me... |