well, are you going to finish this? it's good.

You haven't posted over a year!
Can you continue?

This is really cool! I hope you continue it soon!

I love this story so much. You have developed the charactors so very well. They pratically jump off the page! When will you continue?

hey great story! i can't wait to find out wat happens next! please hurry! :)

No, how could you stop at this point? CONTINUE! I myself have to finish mine, but this is absolutely fabulous! PLEASE FINISH IT! I'm begging you!

i LOVE this story. it is really awsome. write more PLEASE.

FINALLY!

another great chapter. My mind is just reeling with the possible scenarios... especially if you're going to keep the events in the books unchanged.

hope the next chapters come out faster than this one )

Wow...it' been forever. But I love this story. Please update soon! D

I won't comment on the fact that it's been ages since u last posted - it's really good and can u make Alanna trust her as well as Thom?

I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE CONTINUE IT SOON! THANX! TATA

It's not boring, I like it where Alanna AND Thom both get mad!

THIS IS BORING? NO! THIS WAS REALLY FUNNY! well, the end was! that was really good! although i would like to point out one thing: George might be a commoner, but he is well educated, and he doesn't really have as much of an accent for those commoners. Otherwise, really good portrayal of the twins' temper!

HAAHHAAAAAA! If that wasn't 'spuse to be funny I'm so 'cuse... It WAS! Good though. ;) With a pretty little sword HAAHHAAAAAA! Oww, crrraaammmmp...

Wow I love your story! I feel bad for Audra, I'd die if I had to get married at 14! You got to wright more soon!

The Pirate Mage,

Starlynn Windship