A very interesting piece! I am much impressed by your stylization code...and intriguing plotline. Excellent beginning with Danielle, Sam, and Maddie...

Yeah, um, kinda inadequate review for this honkin' big story. ^^; But great job and thank you for writing. :D

My friend Fallingautumnleaves recommended this story to me, and while I started with some skepticism, you have impress me greatly. Your non-linear approach at first appears to be disjointed and confusing, but as I progressed through the story I began to realize how well you wove the story's threads together. This reveals either a fantastic grasp of your plot or some very good editing. Either way, good story, and I look forward to more from you.

Ok I've just spent most of a night and a day facinated by this story and I couldn't stop reading. I loved the way you made the drabbles work so well and this is a great incorporation of poving from different povs and times. It must have driven you insane. Thanks so much for the story!

All I have to say is that this is has been the best post-PP fic that I've read to date. You had me hooked, and fooled, and even watery-eyed at one point... it's just... wow. Incredible.

I love the way you set this story up, giving us a very limited picture of the current situation, which is very obviously a less than ideal one. And then bit by bit, you slowly give us more and more pieces to the puzzle, until we're able to figure it out for ourselves what happened. You had me fooled - FOOLED! - on what happened to Danny for pretty much the whole first half of the fic! I thought he was dead! And when I found he wasn't, it totally threw me for a loop, and I LOVE that! I LOVE that you were able to surprise me like that. Even the epilogue, you had us on pins and needles what happened to everybody, particularly Danny.

Also, there's just a sense of clarity to your writing, and more importantly, reality. It just FEELS real. I can totally picture politicians in the US being as likely to persecute the world's savior as thank him, no matter what he did. That, and the political red tape that came with turning the government's policies around just seemed so realistic. Plus the concerns about Sam's pregnancy, a baby with his powers...

I can't honestly say enough. This fic is stellar, and you can bet that I'll be reading it over again and you can BET I'll be recommending it to fellow Danny Phantom fans.

Good luck with whatever creative endeavors you're taking part in, writing or otherwise. ^^

This setup of chapters is nothing short of brilliant. Overlapping stories is a part of any good storyline, but actually treating them as individual stories, titles and all, and adding snipped situations from the past that relates to the main storyline... it is truly innovative. It reads like nothing I have ever seen on this site, or indeed anywhere, online or paperback. I see how it is a lot of work, but it sure makes for great storytelling.
Hats of for a writer who truly understands the characters she is writing about, inflates their cartoon image and shows the reader new but believable facets of the personalities in question. You ad extra dimensions to likable characters (Vlad not withstanding - him we love to hate), and that is the very essence of fan fiction. Props for the sheer amount of work you have put into this story is in order. The only sad part is, being such a project to undertake, it will probably be way too long before I see a story like this one again. Kudos, Cordria. Kudos.

Loved this... SO... much...

AH! *DIES*

So-so-s-s-o am-amaz-i-in-ng. O_O

There's so much that I want to say about this story. If I wasn't in such a hurry to read on and see what was next, I'd have reviewed every chapter. But, I din't do that, so I'm just gonna review the last chapter like I do to most completed mulit-chapter stories.

There were points where I wanted to cry, points were I laughed until it hurt, points were I was almost sick (probably because I was worried), and points where I wanted to rip out my hair out becuase I wanted to know what was happening/going to happen/happened.

Seriously though, you definately your showed smarts and that you had a deep understanding of the characters. You have very well developed plots and extrodanary story line, and I really and can truthfully say I posilutely absitively LOVE THIS STORY! I thought the suspense and frustration would kill me multiple times, but it's one of the best stories I've read. I like how you involved so much stuff having to do with the Anti-Eco "Laws" that the Guys in White follow. I'll have to consider some of thepoints you made when I watch them in an episode or TV movie. Many times I thought, "Danny Phantom's a bit of a science fiction-y type of thing." and this story really made me think about that. I can safely say that this story made me wanna watch more than one DP TV movie. While I took breaks from reading this story, I watched 'Phantom Planet', 'Kindred Spirits', and 'Memory Blank'. When I finish this review, I'm going to watch 'Reign Storm', 'Control Freaks', 'Reality Trip', 'Torrent of Terror', 'The Ultimate Enemy' (wich I wanted to watch after reading "Infinite Potential"), and probably 'Boxed Up Fury'. Not all at the same time, because I'll read another of your stories in between. I wish I could add this story to a top 10 list, or something. I really like the way that you refered (I can't spell XC XD) to so many episodes. It made me wanna watch them, and remember how much I liked them. Kudos to you, my friend. 10 out of 5 stars, and an A+. A gay Dash? Priceless. XD This story's so good, it made me feel REAL emotions for unreal things... I really liked how you had the idea of a 'ghost' wedding for Sam and Danny along with a human wedding. Very oringinal and wickedly awesome. This story is truly made of AWESOMNESS! It was a little confusing at first, but that's waht made me wanna keep reading. Make sure you keep writing, because you are extremely GREAT. If I missed anything, I'll send you a PM.

Wow. You've rendered me speechless. I like the style - scratch that, I LOVE it! It's crazy and agonizing because you wanna know what's going to happen after those cliffies, but then again, you don't dare to skip ahead because you could miss something important! And the choices you made, when to put which chapter... amazing. Fascinating. I love it.
As for the plot, woah. You kept it suspenseful for so long, I didn't think it possible before. And how did you come up with those ideas anyway? They just seem to fit so well... It was a nice and welcomed change compared to other, mostly-the-same fics. I believe this is one of your better pieces - and the other's are stunning as well! You should write a novel. I can really picture you becoming a star-author worldwide!
I haven't gotten enough words to describe this wonderful, enthralling story... and in my opinion my review can't be long enough to suit the expense of your fic. But since rambling isn't a more respectful way - on the contrary! - I'll stop here. Just know that this is "wow". Because better words have failed me and there isn't really any to express it all.

mfG
Lolchen

Chapter 57: -SHAKES HER!!- -headdesk- How is it that people can be so blind? She’s got it stuck in her head that the others only really love her because they love Danny, and...-facepalm- I’m so hearing Yami in this (only accepted because they have to accept him to accept Yugi – no...Dragon and I haven’t talked about this a lot, why do you ask? =3). -SIGHS- I guess all the greatest characters have their stupid/silly hang ups, eh? Hn...okay so that’s more a comment on people in general...9,9;;

T~T Bad thing...bad thing...Dani...such a brave girl...-HUGS her...and then ties her to her bed while she’s wearing the ecto-flage-


Chapter 58: It was really beautiful to see that conversation replayed from Dani’s point of view. It’s obvious she’s afraid, /terrified/ and that it’s all she can do to make herself continue to go through with this. And, I think I’ve said, while I do understand what she’s doing and why...I still wanna smack her for doing it. T~T Oh Dani...

That...was a really cool scene actually. In light if what it /means/ for Dani...it actually really sucks, but as far as the scene itself that was just...brilliant. XD -shakes her head at the idiot GiW- ~,~;;


Chapter 59: ...Yes he did, didn’t he? Oh Dani...Sam.../everyone/...I can’t imagine how hard it must have been for Tucker to tell all of that, and for Sam to hear it! Or Jazz!! T~T -points!- And I’d throttle /you/ if there wasn’t an epilogue to this! That’d be a horrible way to end a story! -coughs- But since you didn’t end it there, I’m off to read the end, with fingers crossed for a good ending. Not that I’d expect anything less. XD


Epilogue: Y~Y Dani’s not home...But she’s okay...she’s safe...I guess that’s something. -HUGGLES Dani, just glad she’s okay!- I love the bit between Charley and...did you name him? Did I miss his name? -goes and scans back over the scene- Heh...you didn’t name him? Granted I’m not done with the chapter yet, so I’m sure we’ll see his name in the next scene...Anyway...I love the two little ones. I could SO see Danny and Jazz doing the same sorts of things when they were that little. XD -HEART!- Just...everything in this is so sweet...even the bit of melancholy at the end...

...-sighs- Such a bitter sweet ending. Dani’s not there, but they’ll get to see her. She’s okay, not free, but okay, and they’re working on the freedom part. Danny’s well. XD Slow recovery, but well. XD -le sigh- That’s a good way to end a story. It’s only a mater of time before Dani is free, and the rest of the family and friends are spending this /wonderful/ time together – something that many probably would /never/ have dreamed of!


That was an amazingly touching story, and a very unique way of telling it. Dragon had told me that at first you feel like you’re kind of bouncing around, but after a few chapters it starts to make sense and you start to pick up on the progressing themes, and she was right. It was put together beautifully and I think, by doing it this way it had a bigger impact than trying to tell such a story chronologically. Not that it couldn’t have been done that way, but I think the thematic chapter sequence really added something special to this Fic. I once again applaud your work and bow before your wonderful writing skills, especially since I’m pretty sure I’d never be able to pull of something like this. I once again say that you are a brilliant writer. You’ve gotten me emotionally involved in this story, and it’s been a fabulous ride. I’m looking forward to the sequel to Infinite Potential and once again offer to help if you need a sounding board. =3
-finally tosses up this massive post-

Chapter 38: Oh man...that sucks... Not the writing!! Just...the situation... =C

...Nick...I might trust...Dash...not a chance. ^,^;; Poor Tucker...

-HUGS- Guh! I can’t imagine how hard that would be. T-T Oh man...Poor Tucker. Poor Valerie. Poor.../everyone/...T~T


Chapter 39: D-damn...you’re making me want to cry here. =S I can’t say I begin to know how Sam is feeling, but I can sure understand and imagine...or start to anyway. Danny’s gone...likely doesn’t know he’s gonna be daddy...and here, five months later, Sam has /no/ idea if he’s even still alive, let alone okay... -HUGGLES HER! ~ she SO needs it-


Chapter 40: That can’t be easy to hear...and I don’t like where this theme is going. XS (Okay...the angst-loving side of me does, just to see what you do with it, but...). That’s a deep question to ask...especially since his circumstances are so unique...


Chapter 41: That’s...an “Aww crap!” doesn’t even begin to cover this. XC This is insane and...and just.../horrible/!! (Not the writing!) -is as pissed of for Danny’s sake as Tucker is-

...He’s such a good person. He’s always sacrificed for others. Sometimes it was fun, kicking butt and all, and other times it was frustrating or hard...but he’s always done it. I understand now why Dani is so pissed with him, Sam and the rest of the Fentons. I’m thinking that as far as she sees things, /he/ didn’t fight, and /they/ didn’t stop/help him. But Danny has matured by this point...and he’s doing what’s right...-HUGS everyone-


Chapter 42: -facepalms- Tucker! Guess you can’t count on a guy to remember such an important date...-sighs-...

Why do those kinds of subjects always tend to come up at the worst possible times? Never mind that that’s when they’re being thought about most, that’s beside the point! Why?! -shakes head- It needed to be said though...oh Danny...T~T

...TnT I...I don’t know what to say to this part...I mean...it’s so...is hard to imagine that he’s actually going to do this...Not that he wouldn’t, just...-huffs-


Chapter 43: Heh...that explains the cuff from earlier...hmm...and the train...that’s when he broke it off...-pets Danny-

TT~TT Oh Danny. So the Hero, and after Sam had just been talking about hope. The hardest part is...he did the right thing...- HEART!!- HEART!!- HEART!!- HEART!!- HEART!!- It’s also really, really nice to know what happened... I know it’s not all of it yet, but...it’s definitely starting to fall into place...


Chapter 44: I don’t blame Tucker in the least. And this definitely shows how much Danny has grown up. He’s stepping up and taking responsibility, and doing what’s right, even though he /knows/ what will happen...and he’s saying goodbye and getting the backing of his friends and family first...

Oh Dani...Dani, Dani, Dani. Sam doesn’t end up helping, does she? -shakes head- Oh Dani...~,~

-HUGGLES SAM!- T~T Oh man...oh man it doesn’t get any harder than that. But I think Danny just talked her into doing what’s right...Oh man...Danny. TT~TT


Chapter 45: ...-pulls a breath and lets it out slowly- ...Wow...and I mean wow. A very well put together fight, intense and clear and easy to envision. Not to mention the intensity of emotions in the middle of all of it. I was right there with Sam and barely able to breathe as it all took place. -sheepishly admits she caught herself literally holding her breath a few times- That was just...just intense. And Dani...she may be 23, but she’s also not lived that long...she truly is young, emotional, and not sure what to do or think... -petHUGGLES them both-


Chapter 46: ...Didn’t /quite/ see that coming, though I can’t say I’m entirely surprised. Makes me wonder who’s other DNA was used. -blanches, not sure she wants to know- Oh the possibilities...though...it does explain Danny’s current EXTREME of protecting her...it’s not just a “clone” or a “cousin” he’s protecting...but his daughter...wanted to or not he did father her...known or not...it was his genetic make up that fathered her...oh Dani... I wonder if she’s ever told...


Chapter 47: First off...I /should/ be getting back to work...secondly...I’ll admit that the only reason I’m reading this chapter /right now/ is because I scrolled down to see how many pages it was and “Danny!?” “Hi, honey. I’m home” caught my eye...-coughs-...So...-goes to read-

He’s back! He’s back! He’s really back!! But...why? And what the hell did they do to him!?!?! DX -wonders if he’ll ever be able to “go ghost” again- =c Oh...and on a side note...damn you for writing so well! I have work to do! XD;;


Chapter 48: ME! I can /feel/ the energy in this chapter. It makes me want out bounce, and I’m half surprised my own hands aren’t shaking. I still want to know what they did to him, but...He’s home! And poor Tucker. ^,^;; I can SO see him having issues with that sled. XD;;

-heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- There just aren’t any words for this. It’s just so...so WONDERFUL...


Chapter 49: You know...I just love how you can pull out the relationships between people. I mean...Sam and /Paulina/?!?! I can /so/ hear all the snark and...yeah. XD They’ll never be close friends I think, but in many ways they are friends now...and it’s amazing to see. And how could they forget Dani!?!? Heh...I SO can’t wait to see how that plays out...OMG I SO CAN’T WAIT!


Chapter 50: Damn...XS When you’re right, you’re right. -pets Tucker- Okay...so Danny’s been shot up with the next flu vaccine (which will be mandatory) and Dani is missing. Great...just great. XD I mean that. It’s thing like this that make a story exciting and good. -sighs- Oh Dani... I like how you tied things back to those Blood Blossoms. =3 That’s a really neat touch. XD -reads on, resigned to the fact that she’s likely not going to get much work done today...-


Chapter 51: GO TUCKER! -cheers him on!!- Gee...9,9;; Never thought politics would be so exciting...

=S!! Wha-...what’s...Dani? -wants to know what’s in those letters!-

-WANTS TO--wait what? -...and facepalms as it hits her- Vlad didn’t use Maddie’s DNA...he used /Valerie’s/ didn’t he? X I And I’m STILL wanting to know what’s in those letters...she turn herself into the Guys in White?


Chapter 52: Yeah...I’d initially thought that, due to his obsession with Maddie, Vlad had used her DNA, but I guess there are any number of reasons he wouldn’t have done that...Wow...how twisted is that? Danny and Val, in some messed up way, have a kid together...O,o


Chapter 53: “Because you’d freak, kind of like you’re doing now.” Heh...yeah...that’s a given. XD;

And so it hits them like it hit me at the end of chapter 51. -shakes head- It really does make sense... I love how you draw out the similarities between the two girls too. XD It’s a really lovely scene and I can see them out on the grass and just going at it. XD


Chapter 54: -just...pets them- There’s nothing easy about a situation like that, there just wouldn’t be. How do you tell someone that you’ve had a kid with someone when you’ve never been together in the conventional means of creating children? Oh man. ^,^;; I’m...looking forward to how Danny tells Val that she’s a mom. ^,^;;

Heh...”Stop saying that!” Poor Val. That’s a big thing to hear, and I can SO hear this conversation and see their faces, and...-heart- Not that they enjoyed it much, but I did. XD And there it is, Val’s the mom. 9,9...wow...


Chapter 55: Heh...and Dani doesn’t know yet does she? Oh man...is...is that why? Now I /really/ want to know what was in those letters! T~T -applauds your wonderful work and your skill at keeping the reader hooked-

9,9;; Oh boy...I’m seeing where this is going. Dani don’t do it!! That’s...what she does...that’s not why Danny was released was it? -big watery puppy dog eyes-

T~T Dani, Dani, Dani. Please don’t! Don’t do this. I don’t wanna know what’s in those letters anymore. I don’t wanna know! Okay, yes I do, but please Dani don’t do it!! -yes...I’m pleading with a fictional character in a non-canan piece of fiction that has already been completed and so the fate of said character already decided...why do you ask?-

Hn...I’m guessing they have told her. Anyway...-shakes Dani!- Don’t do it! ...and go figure it’s time for me to get back to work...-grumbles-


Chapter 56: SO can’t TELL you how much I wish I KNEW what she was PLANNING! -wants to grab the girl by the shoulders and shake her-

Dani! Dani, Dani, DANI! TT~TT No...nononononononononono! -glomphugglesholds the girl!- No!! I get why she’s doing this, I really do, I’ve a small number of characters that would do the same sort of thing just because they’re so damned stubborn!! HECK!! DANNY would do it, or something like it, if situations were reversed and he could think of a way to get them to agree! -bangs head on wall- Doesn’t make it any less frustrating...oh Dani!

DX Grr! Those guys!! -huffsnorts- You have them amazingly in character, btw...it’s almost kind of creepy to get into their heads like that. XD;; - and your Author’s Note...that’s...really funny actually. XD

Chapter 18: Oh man. Poor Jazz. The mountain didn’t get him, but something else rather “ordinary” did, huh? -shakes head- I reiterate how much I can’t wait to find out what happened, the whole story, all of it...


Chapter 19: Heh...I’m liking Nick more-and-more. It’s neat to see how everyone really got to meet him. I mean...technically they’ve met him before, but now, officially, they’re getting to meet him. And I like him, and Jazz’s mild attraction to him...and Tucker’s suppressed jealousy...and Dani’s teasing, and...XD

Heh...ouch...the dangers of being the new guy, eh? And with a crowd that’s tense and full of secrets. -pets Nick- On the upside all of the foot eating was accidental and easily cleared up. XD And...I can SO see that last scene. Jazz’s head hitting the table, Tucker’s comment, Maddie and Daemon hosing down the grill and Jack covered in two different colors of foam with that BIG grin on his face as he asks what everyone thinks of pizza. XD I...I just might have to attempt to draw that. -copies applicable paragraphs for later ref-

LOL YES! I love the teasing among friends. It’s always so fun to read. XD

Yeah...yeah I like this Nick guy. Jazz is so used to people like her family that it’ll be a nice change to find someone “normal” that truly appreciates all the oddities. Very cute.


Chapter 20: Poor Nick...he doesn’t know how big a skeleton, though I’m sure he’ll understand when he does find out... -petpets him- And Wulf, oh LORD! XD Poor Jazz, practically has a heart attack only to be told to look after the ghost. XD -snickersnerk-

I’ve always loved the idea of Danny and Val fighting side by side, they really would make an absolutely AMAZING team. And the Esperanto...how long did you research that? *curious* XD

Meep! That’s a bad thing!! =S!! Danny! I’d say you really gotta stop leaving me hanging like that, but since I see that the next chapter is part 2 to this one...XD


Chapter 21: Poor Nick...so in the dark and not understanding /why/ people are acting the way they are...I’ve a feeling he’s gonna find out really soon. XD And that is a great idea. =3 -happy that Wulf can help...likes Wulf. XD-

Yayy!! Nick finally knows!! AND DANG IT YOU’RE LEAVING ME HANGING THERE AREN’T YOU?!! Guess, though, that it is safe to assume that they get Danny back and no one is the wiser to his identity...other than Nick who was just told anyway...Especially since this little incident doesn’t have anything to do with kids walking out in front of trains...-sighs- Okay...I can forgive you for this one. ^,~


Chapter 22: You know, I’ve been going off on how you show the relationships with some of the more obscure characters, but (other then Danny and Sam) this, I think, is the first time you show the relationship with main characters. I mean...Sam and Maddie, Sam and Jack, Nick and Jazz, etc, etc. But this is Sam and Tucker...two of the main characters of the show. I think it’s an amazing look at just how close their relationship still is after so long. I mean...helps that they’ve been through SO DANG MUCH together, but still...it’s really nice to see it from a writer’s perspective. It’s really cool. We get to see their worries and concerns and how tight they still are, even right down to sharing such personal tidbits about their lives. ^,^;; -HEART-


Chapter 23: -HEART!- And you did it again! I love you!! -heart- It’s SO true, Sam and Tucker so have their own special bond, and it’s really neat when people catch it... XD


Chapter 24: -snickersnerk- Second time that Sam knows of...first time Val knows of. XD;; Hoo boy. XD Poor Tucker. -pets him-

Heh...hoo boy...I feel sorry for both of the girls on that one. I mean...what do you do right? Especially when neither of you know the whole story. -pets them both and gives Danny and Tucker looks, Danny especially- You know you’re in trouble now...

I...so don’t blame Sam for being pissed. I would be too, and thanks to the fact that I’m not involved...I can sit back and roll on the floor laughing at the whole exchange...figuratively of course...since I’m sitting in my containment box -coughs-cubical-coughs- at work. =3;;


Chapter 25: Heh...got Val thinking, eh? I’m sure it would. -pets Val- Feel bad for Dani too. ^,^;; Danny really is SO protective. He’s got the Big Brother Complex going on with not only his “little sister” but his big sister as well...heh...-pethuggles Dani-

Can’t say I really blame the guy...can’t really have a relationship if you can’t communicate and from everything he’s seen Val disappears at a word from Danny...and usually with some lame excuse to go with it. So this one isn’t lame, but still... All that said...Val, definitely made the right choice, a hard one...but a right one. -pets her-

-hugs Val- It’s neat to see her finally realize that Tucker likes her. XD Isn’t just flirting ‘cause he can, but because he really wants to. It’s neat to see how their relationship is building. -huggles them both...and adds Dani to the mix- And I love the names of the places they went that night. XD


Chapter 26: Oh! Yay! You did go back to this! XD -does a happy dance- And poor Tucker...I can just hear him. XD I’ve /seriously/ got to find a way to animate this, or if nothing else make comic strips out of them. XD;; I love how Nick has so easily meshed with the group, as he said last time, by knowing, so many things make so much more sense. Now...to see if the plan works. ^,^;;

I love Wulf...I so love him. XD And...it’s still a matter of seeing if the plan works. XD Why do I get the feeling things aren’t going to go as they’re hoping? ^,^;;

Heh...okay, that didn’t go as bad as I was expecting, but I can still imagine their hearts going /wild/ in their chests. ^,^;; That was fun, though, seriously fun. XD And the conversation once Danny wakes up...once again...I can /hear/ their voices. XD It’s amazing. XD


Chapter 27: Guh! Guys can be so thick skulled, eh? Sam’s a smart girl, giving him a time limit and all. And poor Wulf. T~T I love how you keep playing off the ring...it really is such a meaningful part of their relationship...

I think I’ve mentioned before that I’m not one for the romantic side of things, but you certainly turn up the heat nicely, getting the point across without going into all the sensual details. -applauds you for that- Poor Sam...so worried...not to mention waking up so disoriented. -pethuggles her-

Aww...so sweet. The casual, almost kind of joking, talk really brings out their relationship, I love it. XD -heart-


Chapter 28: Oh!! A look into what Tucker’s been up to! -would smack him for being so political, ‘cause she can’t stand politics, but he’s good at it...and it’s needed...so she hugs him instead- C’mon Tucker! Do what you can to really help Danny out!!

Ahh...and there go the history makers. -pets Danny and Val-

O...ouch. -shakes head- Those two /so/ need to work things out. I really think they’d be great for each other, but...-sighs- That’s an ouch for both of them... And you’re depth of research amazes me. XD Some writers don’t take the time to dig so deep, while others just aren’t satisfied until they know they got it right...-heart-


Chapter 29: LOL Aw! That was so sweet!! I like the Box Ghost. He’s always been a favorite of mine, the way he just pops out of nowhere. XD Pure win right there. SO love it!!


Chapter 30: You know...I’m sure that helped make a HUGE difference for him around the Holidays...-huggles Danny- I love these little drabbles by the way...so much...


Chapter 31: I knew it! I KNEW it!! XDD I saw that coming, as soon as she couldn’t find the ring. XD That was a neat way to propose and it so FIT for them too. -heart- That was just amazingly cool. XD Gives the ring a little more meaning, after the meaning it’s had all along...-lufs-


Chapter 32: Heh...Danny, Danny, Danny...I’m curious how he’s planning on fixing this. This is an absolutely wonderful scene, btw. I mean...just amazing. The interactions, the information is delivered beautifully. I WANT TO GO TO JAZZ’S WEDDING!! -coughs- I just...so love it. XD


Chapter 33: -HEART!- XD It’s always great when Danny gets a clue. XD He so would and I SO want to see Sam in that dress, OMG!! I SO love this chapter so far. XD -HUGGLES ALL OF THEM!!- -and bows before your greatness-

YAYY!! Truce for the wedding!! -heart!!- It’s so cool that they’re all there. XDD That’s...that’s just...I LOVE IT!


Chapter 34: Okay...this...has got to be my favorite chapter so far. I love action, so I’m SO loving the fighting, the running, the snatch and run. XD THAT is my kind of thing. And all for Sam to find out that she’s pregnant. XD Guh! -melts into a pleased puddle of goo-

-pets Sam- Poor girl...at least she’s still thinking clearly and disguised herself...

Tucker’s such an awesome friend. -heart- That was absolutely amazing. The fears and worries, the determination, everything. SO LOVE! And you’ve got me wondering once again why Dani has withdrawn from all of them...


Chapter 35: -pets Tucker- I can’t help but be suspicious too...but mostly because you’re drawing attention to it, so...9,9;; =3 -curious to see where things lead-

I think I’m starting to get what may have happened with Dani. Anyway...-huggles Tucker and Val- I’m so loving all of this, and can’t wait to see how everything finally works out...


Chapter 36: Deep. I absolutely love how you can get into a character’s head in so few words, it’s just a beautiful thing to see...


Chapter 37: Ahh...all the awkwardness is really great. Shows, in many ways, how much they care for each other. XD And what a proposal. XD That was a fun read. -pethuggles the both of them-

Just like with Infinite Potential, I’ve gallivanted off to work with this piece of fiction. I’m seriously looking forward to the ride ahead, and can’t wait to see what your imagination has in store for such beloved characters. XD


Chapter 1: Aww. It’s so sweet. You’ve got me curious as to why Sam and Maddie are so worried over Dani, and what all is going on!! I really can’t wait to see where you’re going with this. =3 And Sam pregnant...-heart!!-


Chapter 2: You know...that would be the scariest part. I can’t imagine how she felt or what all must have just /flashed/ through her mind in a heartbeat at what happened that day...

-snickersnerk- Poor Danny. I laugh, I know, but I can’t blame him for the reaction. I’m not one to faint on reaction alone, but that might actually be enough to get me. ^,^;; -pets him-

I once again cannot imagine the /terror/ that would be going through me if I were in Sam or Tucker’s place. Danny’s too, but since he’s passed out on the floor he doesn’t count at the moment. But think about it. You’re /best/ /friend/, just survived an explosion!!...and now all these /strange/ and /freaky-in-a-truly-scary-and-not-cool(-yet)/ things are happening to him! =S!!

Kudos to the both of them for keeping their head about them, and yet I almost want to smack them for not telling Jazz what happened. -le sigh- Then again...we’d have lost part of our story had they told Jazz, so...

Heh...and once again we see how fear gives us a story. It’s because Danny is afraid of being a freak and Sam and Tucker are afraid of being considered crazy for believing the impossible, that they keep their mouths shut...and so we have Danny Phantom, the show. Not to say that they’d have done anything differently. I hear it in shows all the time (especially those detective shows), “Why didn’t you tell someone, you didn’t do anything wrong?” And the answer is always, “I was afraid you’d think I did.”


Chapter 3: Me!! That was so sweet. XD We never do get to see/hear them kind of talk out their fears and feelings, so it’s really neat to see here. I marvel once again at how you have their voices and personality so dead on. I can envision and hear this as though it were another episode. XD


Chapter 4: THIS is why I went and read Infinite Potential first. I had a feeling I’d see connections between the two, and wanted to know about them if I did. =3 In reality it was you starting to post this that made me finally go pull IP together so I could read it at work (like I’m now doing with this). Poor Dani. =S;; -worried about her-

-heart- Poor Danny. He already takes so much responsibility onto himself, and now he’s claiming responsibility for Dani. It’s sweet really. There’s no one else to see to her (besides Vlad and that just is NOT an option) and so he does. -heart!-

I think you’ve hit the emotions, dead on. The grief, the anger, the guilt. There isn’t much to say about the scene other than...I love it...

Hm...you have me wondering who exactly they think she’s might be a clone of...I am certainly curious. Probably a genetic splicing of Danny and Maddie? Wouldn’t surprise me. -wicked grin- I love how you once again get into Jack’s character. Everyone sees him as /just/ the buffoon, but he’s not...he’s a father...and a loving and protective one at that. -heart- I also love how both of them have come to the agreed conclusion that...they’ll not be keeping secrets anymore...not the important ones anyway...


Chapter 5: Heh...wow...an amazing twist as usual. I’m curious to see how Paulina came to work with Sam...and the relationship with Dash, ftw?! XD I’m expecting to see how people came to be where they are in later chapters, and if not you can expect me to be pestering you about it later. An amazing chapter. All these little insights into Sam’s life. Danny’s identity is known?!?! Bad thing!! T-T -coughs- Okay...I’m under control again... -continues reading-


Chapter 6: Heh...yeah that about sums things up I think. So much in so little, I love it. You’re amazing.


Chapter 7: I’m SO with Sam on that one. That’s hilarious!! And...I can SO see it in a DP episode. If I didn’t know better I’d have said it was an episode. I think that’s something else I’m just LOVING about your writing. XD

You know...that was a really cool conversation. I love how Danny is kind of taking a look at how he used to be and trying to get Paulina to see how she is right now without totally insulting her...he really is a sweet guy...

Heh...Poor Danny...once again having to protect Sam without drawing attention to the wrong place. I CAN SO SEE THIS IN AN EPISODE! -should really start looking into animating and start trying her hand at some of your stories if you’d not mind. XD;;-

“What do you think this is, a Nickelodeon Show?” – ROFL! Not at all, why do you ask? =3 Oh yes...just...yes. The fight, the scenery, the everything. I can see it all so clearly. XDD

...Poor Paulina. Poor Danny too, but Paulina is the one coming to a realization...now...does the lesson stick?


Chapter 8: ROFL!! I do feel sorry for Dash, injuring his knee and all, but I’m thinking this is a good thing for his character. I mean...personal character, not cartoon character...X I If that makes sense... Anyway...I think that injury was probably a good turn of events for him...-pets him anyway-

LOL I knew it! XD Nothing like having the easy life crushed and having to actually try at life to put life into perspective. =S;; Sorry...that came out sounding a little harsh, didn’t it? =S;; ^,^;;

...Deja vu...I /swear/ I’ve read that last scene somewhere already. O,o?...And any case, it confirms what I said before. He had the easy road blocked all of a sudden and had to face the truth...and /decided/ to face the truth.


Chapter 9: Heh...so that’s how Paulina came to work with Sam? -slumps- Crappy, so wait...what happens to Danny later then?! -worried for him now- ^,^; Lovely chapter as usual. Paulina still her snooty self, but now she’s helping the good guys so she can be forgiven...a bit. ^,^;; Heh...wow...XD


Chapter 10: -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- -heart!- I...I’m speechless. This was so...so SWEET!! -heart!- -heart!- I mean...the melancholy is there, there’s no taking away from that, but it’s an incredible family moment between father-in-law and daughter-in-law. -heart!- -heart!- That was so amazingly heartwarming!!


Chapter 11: And...that about sums things up perfectly too. -heart’s Jack so much- He’s such an amazing person and would SO relearn every belief he ever had if he learned it shed a bad light on his family in any way... -heart!-


Chapter 12: There is a /serious/ relief that comes with knowing where you’re going, and I think you’ve captured that nicely. I can see the light in Danny’s eyes and the smile on his face. =3!! I love how you’ve thought so much of this out too. -heart- So much detail, and depth. It all feels so real. =3!!


Chapter 13: Getting a little more of what happened, this is good, and an infinitely cruel tease. XD I once again just adore the interactions. Jack and Jazz talking over the phone, I can hear it. XD And the relationship between Jazz and Sam is apparent. They’re sisters, they love each other, and they drive each other up a wall sometimes. -heart- And I /really/ want to know more of what happened, how Dani’s involved and how exactly things went to hell for Danny. -keeps reading-


Chapter 14: You know...I really love how you can get so much into so little. I love how you can draw out Jazz’s heart in the matter with very few words. It makes these little drabbles deep and amazing little gems.


Chapter 15: Aw...first meetings can always be awkward...especially when there’s a history there that you’re part of without really being part of. -wonders if that made sense ^,^;;- They come through though, and I love how Jazz comes through. They’re a family, and they fully intend to take this little girl in and make her part of the family too. -heart- Poor Dani... -pets her-


Chapter 16: GUH! You know...it’s neat and frustrating all at once. Reading a story chronologically you expect something bad to happen. It’s a thrill, you know it’s going to come, you just don’t know what it’s going to be until it happens. With this, you already know it happened...but you still don’t know exactly /what/ it is that happened. As I said...neat...and frustrating...all at once. XD That’s not a bad thing though. =3 It’s different, and it really is the appeal of this fic. Something horrible has obviously happened...and slowly you’re not only unfolding how it happened, but how people are working on it as well.
Anyway...about this chapter itself. =3;; It’s nice to meet the kid that was involved in the “hell that broke loose”. It’s cool getting to see the anger and frustration on the parts of Sam and Tucker, and how they ease through that with this boy’s confession of how he views the situation and wants to help somehow. I’m telling you, I’m /dying/ to know how it all happened, and how Dani is involved and...yeah...so can’t wait. -heart- -heart- -heart-


Chapter 17: I like this Nick guy. XD I love how, even though we a readers don’t /know/ him...you manage to make us feel like we know him. Or...I feel that way at least. I mean...the relationship between Nick and Jack, and then with Nick and Sam, the love, the picking, the closeness. This is our first time seeing this guy and yet it feels like he was in the show. And poor Jazz...that’s probably exactly what she’s going though...not to mention the rest of them too... -pethuggles them all-

I really enjoyed the way you ended this piece. Things have turned out for the best in the dire situation. Danielle's involvement and character was wonderfully written in chapter 59.
I adored the scene in the epilogue. You led us for a while wondering who's death occurred and brought the focus to the cute little family moment. I love your explanation for the baby's name - its really quite fitting. All the little loose ends were neatly tied up.

Congratulations!! You've finished and its been enjoyed every step of the way. :)

This is the best Danny Phantom fanfic I've ever read, thank you so much for writing such a great story I can't wait for the sequal to Infinite Potential. You are truly an amazing writer!

Thanks again

- Kim