Sorry, but I don't like this. It's poorly written and totally off the charts with what REALLY happened with the Myotismon saga. I don't think I'm going to read anymore! I've had a bad run of luck so far with bad stories and it doesn't seem to be ending.

singing sling? oh THATS origonal.

It was good exvept the last chapter, I just don't like the coupling thingy I guess.

More Writings! Love It

WOW! Very cool! I'm speechless...HURRY AND FINISH, PLEASE!

not bad

The grammar was awful and you switched POV's too rapidly. Events happened and transpired too quickly. You forgot easy things about dialog, like finishing up with quotations. There wasn't enough description to fill in the action, so everything just sounded easy to do by the Digidestined. The idea? Very good. I enjoyed the general idea and I wished that it would linger.

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