yay!

wow. this is seriously intense. i really loved the part where freddie's thinking about the girl he's 'not thinking about'. i laughed. but wow, the date was really in person, like i could see this happening in like, seddieland xD. oh and the freddie asking her out thing was awesome. but i expecially loved the last line, it was just perfect, really.

so are they going on another date? or was the second date the smoothie bit? cuz i'll really look forward to some sort of confession from both of them.

update soon!

wow wow wow. you couldn't have wrote this any better. it was intense with the write amountof humor to keep the story light. great chap. update please.

Aw, don't beat yourself up! I loved it :) Though I was hoping for a more dramatic confession, but those are everywhere, in every other Seddie story. Haha.

I loved Freddie's seesaw pep talks in the bathroom. I laughed picturing them.

Carly was super funny in this, too. Hahha :)

The date was super intense, yet hilarious at the same time. I really don't know how you pulled that off.

Best line - "It was like I could do anything now. Go swim the English Channel. Climb Everest, twice. Even date Sam Puckett."

Update soon! :) Happy thanksgiving to you, too!

This was great! I loved the part where the costumer in the restaurant told Sam to punch Freddie! Can't wait till you update again!

this is seriously killing me! i love the story, it is fantastic! and not know what is going to happen is killing me! please update soon, i really need to see where all this is going to end up!

ah!

this is so awesome, seriously.

i loved the bit before freddie's dream, like, the part where he's like switching between sam and amelia. i actually felt like i was watching, like a movie trailer or something, where you just have sam-amelia-sam-amelia-sam-sam.. dun-dun-duhh! i was like, woah, that was so cool.

and he finally admits to it. it's kind of sad though, cuz it's kind of like, in theory he's perfect for amelia, but a way, life doesn't turn out the way theory does, right? i think he's kind of scared of sam cuz she's danger and risk and adrenaline, but that's sam.

anyway. i am babbling, but this is really good. like actually.

update soon!

This was awesome. i love they way you are able to capture the readers attention and you should be very happy with the way you write. The characters are very much like the real show. please update soon.

Btw, i just started writing and was hoping that you couls review my story and give tips on how to improve it. thx a lot.

Hehe, I know what you mean. I get so nostalgic when I read over iRemember. Lol.

YES! YES YES YES! He finally brought it to open air! I love it! And I absolutely adored Carly's reaction. It was perfect!

I thought Freddie's dream was real! I got way too excited P

By far, the FUNNIEST line of this chapter was: "If I had a car, I'd make sure my coverage included fire, flood, earthquake, and Sam." lol. Simply amazing. Really :)

Yay! Seddieness! Freddie FINALLY confessed! Now he just has to confess to Sam! Update soon please!

a new chapter yay! made my week. you cant leave us hanging!

Good Chapter. Update Soon! SEDDIE!

Man, I love reading your fanfics on my crackberry. My friends are all, ?, because it looks like I'm reading an insanely long text with little squeals here and there.

omg amazing amazing amazing amazing. i dont know what else to say! i looved when he confessed and they were all like serious, and then they just started grinning. omg, loved it!

So totally cool, can't wait for the next CHAPTER! It's gonna be all exciting! I wonder if Sam will be waiting at the door... Lol! Well it's super fantabluous! Keep on writing and Keep on keepin on!

Not as polished.. what are you talking about this was awesome!

ok.. it was more ramble-y in a way.. but i works out since Freddie is in a rambling, confused state, right? so yea.. im so glad Carly knows now! can't wait for the next one! :D

..i loved the dream too. :D