ohh cute cute one shot! :)) im not usually a fan of one shots but sometimes they are WAY cute and this one def is WAY cute! ;0)

Aw this was one of the cutest stories i've ever read! I love it!

you got to stop doing this to us.

starting a really good story, and then you just stop after one chapter. that really isn't fair. i was really enjoying reading that. and all of the other stories you've had great ideas for. which is all of them.

madison

So cute! I love it!

oh my god imagine that! poor rory! not that shed mind she got to see a half naked logan!

we're all envious of that bath robe!

great story

I have to be honest, it wasn't your best. Also, most of the story is very unrealistic. It's just to hard to picture in my head. Sorry. I still think you're an amazing writer though.

good story

I'm going to be honest. The writing style is weird. It doesn't sound like Rory. Not to mention, this is only at the beginning of their relationship. I can't imagine Logan being so caring and willing to close his eyes to Rory naked. Good job anyway!

Loved it!

sexy, suggestive, sweet :) Just a few words I might use to describe this story. We all know that Rory is affected so much by Logan but I like that you threw in something that shows the reader that the attraction is a 2 way street (he is trying to help undress but then realizes that he might do something if he continues). I love one-shots that expand on a scene that we saw. GREAT story...5 stars :)

I just loved it;) Its so ... Logan:)

Oh I really liked that! I liked hearing drunk Rory's thoughts. Her stream of consciousness was really belieavable. I also thought your Logan was really well-written. He wasn't overly sweet, he was slightly aloof, still snarky, perfectly consistent to the Logan at the time. Good job.