 Lynnia 7/16/00 . chapter 1 This is really good, keep writing! |
 Cloe 7/16/00 . chapter 1 I liked it, blood, glowing scars, Voldemort appearing in peoples bedrooms very cool. Keep going, and I love sliders almost as much as Harry Potter. |
 Lizzy 7/16/00 . chapter 1 The story has very good potential. Keep up the good work! |
 anon 7/16/00 . chapter 1 good...continue |
 Quidditch 7/16/00 . chapter 1that was really really good, I hope you make this very long so that I can enjoy it! One comment (sorry, isn't there always a mistake though?) -Ok, I started to write it then realized I made the mistake, you were correct. No mistakes for you! WONDERFUL JOB! |
 martian 7/16/00 . chapter 1 Yeah, it is like GOF, but with a different twist. One little nitpick: Harry was not born in 1980. Why do I know this? In GOF, it states that Dudley throws his Playstation out the window. Playstations wern't avalible until 1996-1997, somewhere around in there. So the years wouldn't make sense if he had been born in 1980. :-) |
 Meghan 7/16/00 . chapter 1 Cute beginning...I like, i like. |
 Libra 7/16/00 . chapter 1 It seems really exciting and well written, I think this cold get really intresting, hurry up on the next part! |
 Lannakah 7/16/00 . chapter 1 That was way cool |
 Fleur 7/16/00 . chapter 1 It was good. Spoooooky. Like the first chapter of book 4. CONTINUE! |
 PixyChick 7/16/00 . chapter 1 Hey! I really like this! Very good and interesting! Keep goin! Good idea :) |