well i hope grimmjow does not need to forget because hime will stay with him...

WOW is all i can say. absolutely incredible and so full of sexual tension! more? haha. it was brilliantly written with excellent use of emotive language and you conveyed grimmjow and orihime's feelings to me very well. i could feel the fluctuation of emotions as if i were in those situations myself. amazing :) x

LOVED IT!! PLEASE WRITE MORE ON THIS COUPLE!

Ooh! I love, loved it! The language might be a bit much for the T level, but hey, I'm not complaining. Anyways, I think you did an awesome job with this! Thanxs! :) :p ;)

Wow this was great!! Your descriptive words, the flow of it... just great. I'm really impressed. I LOVE how you characterized both Grimmy and Inoue. Excellent. Inoue - so vulnerable - and Grimmjow... badass but I can see him do something like that; or what I mean to say it is possible!!

My only nitpick was as much as I love your writing, sometimes the - hyphens were a bit too much and kinda interfered with reading. But either than that, just fabulous!

GD

Ohmygad, I loved this.

You captured their personalities well, without compromising Grimmjow's harshness or Orihime's naiveté, which often happens (more with Grimmjow because it's easy to misunderstand his character) and I don't really like it, because Grimmjow is really not a nice guy! It's in his essence to be bad after all! His redeeming point I'd say is his honour, and you conveyed that well in the fact that he didn't ravage her straight away when she requested that he help her forget n.n

The last line really was a killer, less is really more sometimes! It summed up a lot about Grimmjow- his passion, devotion, and of course the ability to know what he wants.

Well done for such a fluid, well carried fic, I enjoyed it! I hope to see more from you in future!

Oh my. What exactly did he do to her? 0o

a good idea !!

love it.

It's a wonderfully written piece of work. I sometimes wish that I could find a nice epic story between the two of them, but alas the fandom is still quite small for this pairing. I think Grimmjaw is quite in character here because... I mean, even he has his thoughtful moments. HELL he understands Orohime better (cannon here) than Ichigo... the way he told Ichigo that if he really wanted to save her, why didn't he consider her feelings and run the hell away from there. ... and the idiot didn't get it. *sighs* anyways, wonderful ficlet. It had a nice feel to it all the way through, not too dark... and not too light.

Wow, that was good! I'm glad you didn't have him OC or anything.

I am impressed, by far. Grimmjow is in character (which seems to be misconstrued with a lot of other writers- along with misspellings),and Orihime's reactions to him seem like Tite-sama could have written the same. The situation in which this takes place is also to my liking. May I say, Dark Hope Assassin, you are a talented writer. Kudos to you, and please continue typing up more GrimmHime. FF needs more of this pairing.

Grimmhime has to be my favourite pairing and you've written this so well. I look forward to more!

Awesome! I loved this story! Poor Orihime...I felt so bad for her...and Grimmjow - loved him and his sudden switch! Great job - keep up the good work!

I absolutely loved this. The way you wrote Grimmjow was done to the very tip of his sick mind and I enjoyed it. That slight cynical but sweet(not really, but I can't find a better word) side you gave him in regards to Orihime was an interesting perspective. I kinda wish this was continued but I guess too much of a good thing can be ruined. xD You've officially made me into a Grimjoww/Orihime fan.