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SelKar 2/24/12 . chapter 1
It was an amazing one-shot, thank you very much for writing it and sharing it.

SelKar
HerGoldenWings 1/23/12 . chapter 1
I'm tempted to print out all of your stories, bind them together and call them my bible.
ClaireBouldwin 1/13/12 . chapter 1
Kept me reading until the end, this is brilliant
lttlelola 9/23/11 . chapter 1
he he! one more story then i'm off to bed
Aralune 9/1/11 . chapter 1
I can't wait for their fathers' reaction xD I don't think you could have described a Scorpius more uke than this one xD I loved it 3
Memeal 8/21/11 . chapter 1
I have one... (count that, one!) only one chance to review this fic, so I have to make it count.

I have come back to this story over and over again. I haven't the slightest clue what draws me back, what makes this particular story stand out from the crowd, other than it does. It isn't the plot, which is fun and rather cliche, or the character choice (though this story has ruined me forever for any other Albus Jr/Scorpius stories forever I've discovered to my horror) as there isn't any particular draw to the remainders to the story - so the only thing I can figure on is that the characterizations are just glorious as well as the particular combination of playboy/jock and studious/sensitive though that too may be cliche.

Or rather, perhaps it does what some of the very best in fiction does and that is, it takes what everyone WISHES the cliche were, and makes it wonderful. This is a delightful, happy, darling piece of fiction and I'm not ashamed to say that I read it over and over again, and that I have it so high in my internal favorite list - the conversations are adorable, the characters are just so loveable as to be almost candy floss, and I just adore how it is obvious that Albus has met the one thing he wants and knows that he'll do anything to get it while Scorpius is just as driven to rebuff any advances from this ne'er do well who just wants a bit of his backside.

CUTE and adorable and it makes me wish I had a gi-normous teddy bear so I could just cuddle it and grin each time I read it. Which of course means that after another couple years or so, I will be forced to seek it out once again, find it, and write another sappy review under a pseudonym and leave that as well. Just because sometimes, one has to spread the love.
PockyPand4 8/12/11 . chapter 1
D'aww
Maralei01 8/7/11 . chapter 1
Claps hands...Bravo! Love this pair together. Love that they are both a little clueless. Hope you write more of them.

Cheers :0)
MorphiaMusings 8/3/11 . chapter 1
Aww! This was simply fantastic!

I just adore how you made Scorpius so different from how most people portray him but still showed us little glimpses of his Malfoy heritage (the SMIRK!). Also, I can not get enough of your Slytherin Albus!
ChemicalDare 7/27/11 . chapter 1
Aw, I'm growing quite fond of that pair!:) I like how you write those two differently in every story I've read so far!:) I guess it's easier, because their characters aren't defined as much as Harry or Draco's but it's still pretty remarkable!:) Albus seemed like some kind of dangerous, mystery guy at first and Scorpius was all Ravenclaw (and I thought it was quite funny he didn't seem to like Slytherins considering who his father is)
SuperCali 7/23/11 . chapter 1
Swell!
VeniVidiViciMR 7/5/11 . chapter 1
This is my favorite al/scorp obeshot EVER!
sasunaru2themax 6/29/11 . chapter 1
Hahaha, fabulous. xx
dress up romance xx 5/2/11 . chapter 1
I didn't realize this was your story when I began reading, I should have known since it was soo good! I love your stories, they are amazing
SoOutOfControl 4/7/11 . chapter 1
This was absolutely amazing! So well-written, very intense and hot!

Thanks for sharing!
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