   Swirl-spill 8/15/10 . chapter 1Nice little one shot. I'm not surprised the Brotherhood listen in on to conversations. I mean, how in the world would they learn what's going on? |
| Ace-of-Cyberspace13 8/7/10 . chapter 1 Wow! I feel so sorry for them!
-Ace |
| Reianshitsu 11/25/09 . chapter 1 Wow like this is amazing! Wonderful capture of the characters. Sounds exactly like something they'd do. I recently got an obsession for this couple so I'm reading stuff on it. This is the best so far!
Rèîánhitsü |
| Innocent Lamb 8/15/09 . chapter 1 Lolz! That was so cute! I can't stop laughing now. Even though this was mainly dialogue and took me all of 2 minutes to read I still really enjoyed it. |
| Tanya 8/3/09 . chapter 1 I remember reading this story almost three or four years ago! I still love it, it still makes me laugh :D |
| DemonAngelGirl 11/15/08 . chapter 1 *uncontrolled laughter
hahaha! this was great. hahaha!
i believe in you! |
| CryingTearsOfBlood 8/9/07 . chapter 1 So cute! |
| myself 12/15/06 . chapter 1 that was kind of mean but man it was funny LOL :) |
| NarutoandKakashiFan 8/15/05 . chapter 1 Poor Lance |
| mycookienotyours 8/19/04 . chapter 1 HA! That was some funny stuff! |
| dogbertcarroll 8/17/04 . chapter 1 LOL! I've seen similar scenes in real life. |
| N. Watanabe 1/6/04 . chapter 1 I loved this story! Hilariously hilarious! Okay well yeah...this story is very old...I've just now realized that...well...like...2001...and it's 2004 now...okay well it's STILL AN AWESOME STORY! KEEP WRITING! |
| WormmonABC 6/27/03 . chapter 1 Mwahahaha! |
| Critara's Pride 2 la-Z 2 sign N 6/21/03 . chapter 1 Aw. that's so beautiful... and funny. totally screams sequel. I love Lance/Kitty fics... |
| KnightAmemait 6/16/03 . chapter 1 Love this story! I can just imagine it happening too! Is there going to be any more? |
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