Absolutely stupendous.

Best Zoey 101 fiction. Ever. No joke. Chase/Lola totally pwns that Zoey biatch.

:D

And what else can I say really?

That was stunning. The characterizations were spot on. This oneshot was also very interesting for me because it took something so simple and turned it into a complex maze that made perfect sense. Chase simply followed the trail of bubbles and found Lola, who he had never seen in a certain light before. Their moment was very cute, although it seemed sort of one sided. I suppose that's because the story is in Chase's point of view. That would be a beautiful way to find love, but even if they never had a romantic relationship, at least Chase learned something that day. It's better to have loved and lost, than never loved at all.

I have to say one more time that this story was absolutely stupendous. I'm looking forward to reading more Chase/Lola stories from you.

Oh Song...that was absolutely amazing!
You made something so simple sound beautiful.
You are truly an amazing writer!

This is lovely. Beyond lovely actually. You put all the other writers in this fandom to shame with this piece of lovliness. I loved being inside Chase's head as he followed the bubbles. I love that when he saw her, surrounded by bubbles, blowing them out of the wand, he perceived her in a new and different manner. I love that you really captured her free spirit. The ending was the best though, kind of bittersweet. This is just so wonderful and it's too bad that so many Zoey 101 readers won't give it a chance because it's not C/Z or Q/L. I adore it and can't wait for more (Chola! And, of course, Zogan). Sorry for the super long review.

THAT. WAS. BEAUTIFUL.

You've set my Chola love aflame, Song. Something that was so simple such as bubbles, turned into something so intricate and beautiful. Ah, bubbles. I so pictured Lola dancing through a flurry of bubbles, and Chase joining in after being loosen up and somewhat freespirited. And I just wached "Lola Likes Chase" yesterday, so I'm on the biggest Chola buzz of my life =) Lol.

I'm favouriting this. Gah, I have to read it again. And I like that Chase's thoughts are so eloquent because he is a writer of sorts, lol. But I like that so much.

And thank you so much for the Misa icon. You have no idea how wide the grin on my face got. You're my new best friend =)

One last thing, thank you for reviewing "New York"

I appluad you, and thank you for opening my eyes to this lovely couple.

-Erika