 Nat-Nat-Madness 2009-12-09 . chapter 14Hi.
I love this story. I think you could have Tanya with Edward and Garrett with Alice but when Edward or Alice see the other with Tanya or Garrett they get jealous and end up with them and Tanya and Garrett together.
UPDATE SOON PLZZ!!
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 TheLadyKT 2009-11-23 . chapter 2I think of that song every time I read New Moon |
 Eh-x-tah-cee 2009-11-21 . chapter 14Rose This amazing!! ha ha I love it especially since Jasper nad bella is one of my fave parings!! Are you gonna finish? OOh HAve you found a publisher? |
 wendy1969 2009-10-26 . chapter 14i like this so far. is there going to be anymore to it? |
 macullen077 2009-10-06 . chapter 14i thought that this story was good thank you for writing it!
there are so many talented writers and you are one of them from macullen |
 delilah69 2009-09-29 . chapter 14i really like it! its so sweet! im glad they are happy! |
 CrAzY AlIcE LaDy 2009-09-27 . chapter 14kate or tanya for edward! |
 CrAzY AlIcE LaDy 2009-09-27 . chapter 8awesome. |
 Essaouire 2009-09-27 . chapter 14So, this story is coming to an end? It makes me sort of melancholic, since I think it's very well witten and sweet and it also has a sentimental value for me since it's thanks to your story that I started liking JasperBella... but all good things must come to an end I guess... Yay, Jasper proposed! and oh my God, Bella's irrational attitude towards marriage makes a comeback... it's my pet peeve of sorts, since my mum is a psychologist and she told me that children of divorced parents are actually more likely to marry early because they seek stability, so Bella's aversion to marriage is psychologically improbable...[not to mention stupid, I just can't understand her to be honest]... but anyway, I'm very, very, very glad that you didn't make Bella into some sex-crazed girl like Mrs Meyer did. Thank you for that! It made me very happy :) Jasper's attitude towards Bella's change is the one I would have liked to see in the books. And of course Edward looks pained *eyeroll* I have no ill feelings towards the guy but really, he irritates me sometimes :)
Since you're asking for opinion...could you pair up Edward with Maggie from Breaking Dawn? I've never read that book but I read about Maggie and I think they'd go well together [not to mention, the Cullens need a redhead in their midst :)] as for Alice... well, whoever you want to pair her with will be fine :) |
 hockeygrl13 2009-09-26 . chapter 14i think edward and alice should b together |
 teamedward2110 2009-09-24 . chapter 14i finally was able to read all of it and i love it; it is really good and i can't wait for more and i think that you should probably make Alice and Edward get together only if you want unless you want to put them with somebody else please update soon |
 teamedward2110 2009-09-23 . chapter 7i haven't finished reading this story but so far it is really good i just wanted to add this story before i went off to class. |
 MajorWhitlock 2009-09-21 . chapter 14i dont know if its just me but at age 18 one isn't at a point where they can make decisions about wanting or not wanting kids, also i never got how bella was wanting to be changed but didn't want to commit to marriage. |
 JenniferRayne 2009-09-19 . chapter 14OMG! I love this! I'm totally crying that was so perfect! |
 jasperhaleismygreekgod 2009-09-19 . chapter 14alice and edward to be together because i really think garret is more of an eventios person |