That was really fun! One thing I enjoyed most about this story is the fact that you've managed to capture their personalities really well. Not everyone can do that, and most of the time it could be a factor of ruining the story's sense. You did a wonderful job with this and I can see just how far their relationship has went through, and is going through with all the reminiscing and stuff. At some points I was quite hassled on such means Tsunade went through to decipher him, but overall, I wasn't left bored. Thank you for this, best wishes and more power. :)

Oh...my god! ^.^ ..you really captured the essential of the characters!!... wonderfull!! Dattebayo!

Absolute best fic I've found so far of this pairing. Your voice is crisp and fluid; I really enjoyed reading. :)

I loved it! Couldn't stop reading. So very well done, an awesome story! Not only would the two fit together very well. But you also made it funny and wrote realistic conversations. Great piece!

hey, i really liked that!kinda funny, when she finally said"i love you"it started thundering...i hope thats a good sign...Anyway, i liked it alot!:)

Very well-written story. I enjoyed reading it very much!

Please do continue to write, your works are incredible.

-two finger salute-

Entrenched out.

Thank you for you time and amazing story i loved it!

SQUEE!

I liked it! (When do I ever not?)

Oh, but it was finally updated, and finished, and I LOVED the ending because it was just so perfectly them and lol they were going to send Kakashi (I wouldn't complain '^^) but yeah, Tsunade/Kakashi just doesn't work.

I loved it. It made me happy.

I'm feeling tired from ninjutsu. Which is understandable, because it's tiring. OMFG the Shihan counts so fast for the crunches and pushups! It's like by the time I'm halfway through 'ichi' he's on 'ni'. But it's fun.

...Sidetracked...

Loved it!

Oh, that had me laughing and melting and smiling and almost crying, all at once. It was just so funny - "Hatake? I changed his diapers?" - and achingly sweet and heartbreaking (because she does send him on that mission and just the tears itself) in only a way Jiraiya and Tsunade can be when you write them. Excellent.

And now I have something to hopelessly try and live up to with my writing them. xD

Hime

Great chapter, thoroughly enjoyable I must say. The lemon wasn't racy or provacative at all. You give just enough information to get your point through, that's what makes this story so good. You don't over exaggerate. Again, I must say I really liked this story and hope to read more from you.


~Crimson Sakura Princess~

LRS,

TSUNADE FINALLY GIVES IN TO WHAT SHE'D BEEN WANTING, WAITING FOR, and possibly dreaming (fantasizing) about! It took her long enough but DA MAN is all about patience and letting thick walls crumble on their own.

Tsunade and Jiraiya truly deserve to each other, belong to each other, need each other, and basically worship and pine for each other in their subconsciousness. Esepcially the way you write them.

As always, you wrote Jir/Tsu as the loving couple they show to each other in their private moments. The time when they are together and no one is around. Even if he's just popping in through the window in order to convince Tsunade to join him for a drink.

Great work, LRS. Great work indeed. I eagerly await your next foray into the intimate world of the Toad King and his Slug Queen.

Knighte

Very nicely done. I love the way you write. Short and sweet chapters, but just enough to keep us satisfied and wanting more lol. You cut the bullshit and get to the story itself. Just wanted to say again that I like this story and I hope you update soon!


~Crimson Sakura Princess~

aaw this was really cute x3
I was wondering what Jiji was up to because he acted so shyly xD But this is okay if making Tsunade angry means making her more cute- If this is possible XDD""
Good work, I loved it like every chap.
Looking forward to chap 8!

ja, ne!

Tsunade is slipping closer and closer to that dangerous precipice called love. I wonder, will she be able to do the delicate ballet of being Jiraiya's Hokage during the day and being his tender lover at night.

Will Jiraiya catch Tsunade when she finally takes that last step and lay her gently upon his chest?

and will...

Gai ever get laid??

Hinata ever admit her feelings for Naruto?

Temari ever do the right thing and ravish her unsuspecting prey?

Kakashi do the right thing and put down his book and start pursuing living, breathing, kunoichi?

and will...

Ebisu ever admit he's an Aburame and use his bugs to sweep Shizune off her feet and into his arms?

oh wait a minute, I think the last one actually happened. :)


I love this story LRS, I can't wait to see how this delicate little ballet of timidity ends.

one question though, is it me or is Tsunade a bit Hinata-ish when she buzzed?? ;)


Knighte

Ooh, the momen we've been waiting for--the prelude to a kiss! Can't wait to see what'll happen next!