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Wow. It's very nice! The way one thing just leads to another so naturally without jumping impossibly or strangely is just great. Very little people can develop a romance like that in under 1500 words, but you did it stupendusly. BTW, though, I'm sure Luffy isn't that innocent. I bet he's had a few crushes before. But you did catch his childliness and bluntess perfectly, in any case. Once again, wow. And the ending was pretty funny, too! XD. Freedom Creed

amazing!XD

I really liked it, and i just thought it was awesome, great work!:D

*giggle*
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cute! im getting into the ZoroLuffy fics and i loved yours! Luffy is kinda dumb sometimes but also cute :D