 Proser 2008-08-28 . chapter 1 EXCELLENT beginning. Random Starscream dialouge is nector, keep it up. I'm curious to see your portral of Megatron... Animated is probably the most mentally stable Megatron, ever. XD |
 starseeker347 2008-08-28 . chapter 1I like it so far. My interest is piqued!
update soon, please!
starseeker347 |
 Naundi 2008-08-28 . chapter 1 Very very interesting and hilarious! "Headbot"... AHAHAHAHA! Update soon please |
 Delilah Draken 2008-08-28 . chapter 1 Now that was a very interesting beginning for your story. The bantering between Megatron and Starscream was as delightful as in the cartoon. |
 Tugera 2008-08-28 . chapter 1Oh this is wonderful~! =D
Wasp! Yay, he's so freakin cutely messed up. XD
And Starscream's new /body/'s reminding me of what happened to that one girl in that Mars Attacks movie, or somethin. XDD
My god I love your dialog. Starscream vs Megatron: Sarcasm! Is freakin perfect. XD
updateupdateupdate-!! Un, I patently await your next update. ^^ |