Excellent story! Is this your first story? You write incredibly well for a first-timer :)

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Ne, don't be embarrassed by stuff like that, everyone makes mistakes >^^<
I have to say I really like the way the fic has been progressing so far. Though I am quite apprehensive just for the reason Fujino's in the fic..but I guess it can't be helped. (I don't hate her..She just creeps me out..big time..XD)I just seem to notice that every fic that has Nao and Fujino fighting for Natsuki's affection turns dramatic. Not that I mind. It just bugs me when Fujino gets Natsuki. I'm a NaoNat fangirl you see? hahaha
Also the part with Mashiro and Arika was quite welcome, nothing wrong with that. ^^.
Even if it is just the 2nd chapter I already appreciate your style of writing. Keep up the good work!
Gambate!
P.S. Oh yeah if there's anything I can help with let me know. I'd be more than willing though I rarely go online.
P.P.S. I REALLY REALLY HOPE this turns into NaoNat. No pressure or anything but please update soon!
P.P.P.S. Ne do I get a prize? I was first review. hahahahahaha jokes!

aww that flashback was incredibly adorable :D
i like theinteraction between nat/nao, they're awesome :D
i agree with mashiro arika, they're pretty cute too
thank you for the longer chpater :)
i'm surprised you don't have more review, ppl should be reading this, it's awesome.
Looking forward to more!
I absolutely adore an older Natsuki

I like it, nao is a cool character and there aren't many fics with her centered.
i am really looking forward to the nao/nat, i hope you include it

MWUAHAHAHA!

ALRITE!

NatNao and maybe some ChieAoi?!

I'm mostly looking forward to Chie though.

:D

~ManiazAzn

That was an ultimately great start. It was very in character especially Chie's. (A flirt will always be a flirt)It's quite interesting. And I'm already twitching to see what happens next!Hope you'll make it in NaoNat! Your writing was real good, just a slight correction though. It's "Fourth Column" not "Forth Column". It's not flaming. I just want to help improve it. >^^<
Please update it soon! I'll be waiting! XD