i just found this story and am very sad you have never updated on it.

I WILL EAT YOU IF YOU DO NOT HAVE THE DOCTOR COME FOR HER!(FIRE SPILLS FROM MOUTH!)

wow this is really good, even if it is just a tad sort :(
u shud rite sum more on it :) i've always imagined a story like this, where rose gets sent to a mental institute, but i always fort people wud laff at me or wudn't take me seriously :( sometimes i luv her just as much as Jackie Tyler does as a daughter...all the same...well done with this and keep up the gud work...

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Really liking this story - definitely write more! :-)

I like it, I can see this story has potential to go places. hum...sugesstions, maybe you could take up the Doctor's point-of-veiw instead of Rose's, so her lack of response sticks longer in the tale. Oh, if it works, add in the Doctor's planet - yeah I know it blew up, but its fiction, anything could happen.

Oh Oh Oh! Your Muse should be heeded. This is remarkable. Please find the time to keep going with this one. It is intelligent and has such possibilities for a complete story. It is finely crafted and well written and your Muse really should be trusted. Listen to her whispering and find your way back to this story. Please?

Ooh, really good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, if there is one. Great writing

Talia Taylor

Brilliant story so far. Keep it up - can't wait for more!