Y.Y
i wish I was never born xD

I'm sorry I was ever revived...

*Goes to rner*

I shouldn't have been born~~

-gloom-

xD Anybody who complains about the quality probably hasn't realized just whose poem this is supposed to be...

Ahaha, oh boy, that would've caused me to visit Mr. Corner.

Awesome job.

it actually not that bad but FIX THE BLOODY INTRO!

hahaha!! so good!!
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but
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I wish I wan't born... * sits in corner*

Ah. I like. I did wonder what exactly Chrona had written to send half the class into a depression. A suitably weird combination of cute and creepy here.

Pretty good, but you spelled weirdly wrong.

I know you have it in you to do better than this. I have read a lot of your writing.

It's a good attempt but it's not your usual quality nor is it your usual format.

Don't give up, but I know you have more in you than this. This is a hollow example of your abilities.

This is not a flame, merely an observation.