Pretty good, I have a couple of minor pointers though.

1. Don't use the words "kudos" and "spirits" so much! :P

2. You never really explained how she saw him. It wasn't a big part of the story at all. You should have either fleshed it out so it made sense, or left it out altogether.

The end scene where everyone found them was cute, keep up the writing.

:)

very impressive. There where times i think Toph was too stubborn for her own good, but hey thats just how she is. Really good job and nice romantic comedy style.

Write on

not bad not bad at all but toph is a little to tough if u ask me an sokka is just to much of a wimp if u ask me but very very good.

hahahahahha i loved the ending where toph stole sokka's shirt, i do that to my brother all the time hahahaahahhaah great job

i liked it! it was cute!