well written fic, love it very erotic :P lol

Very cool, fun read. When I have a little more time you know I'll review more.

wow! Amazing little one shot to read while playing song. That's two out two of these little one shots of yours I've read today, that have been absolutely enjoyable. Now I'm off to read "Phoenix Ashes" Just how the hell I missed two Rivalshiping and a Puzzelshipping fic, I'll never know. Guess I'll just have to keep n out for you. Your work is a real pleasure to read. thanks for sharing.

Very cool, I could picture just about everything happening too :]

What a great fic! The song goes great with the theme. Rhianna is one of my favorite singers and she is so sexy and sensual, which really comes thorugh in her songs and I find that when I hear her song I either want to dance or strip.LOL

Wow. Just...wow.
Best I've read in ages.

I liked the story! It was really good. I can't wait to read the next one. I hope that you make another Yugi/Yami or Atemu! That's my favorite couple!

I do like club stories! Mostly with Yugi/Yami, Yugi/Atemu, or Yugi/Seto. I like those.

Great story! I really enjoyed reading it. I should have sooner but I was busy writing mines. Now, I'm finished.

Again, great story!

Very lovely descriptions, everything from the city night scene to the bar (I just had a feeling it was Jounouchi the bartender before Yuugi's "POV" came in) to the bedroom scene. Not too explicit, but the 'element' is still there.

I just spotted a small typo in the line "clearly a pleasruable feeling", but otherwise it's all good.

Keep up the good work~ ^_^

` kaoru; hime no ichigo