Too cute. :3

Erk and Serra's A level support conversation left unsatisfying tension. I'm grateful for your effort to resolve it. Well done.

You know, I'm 100% positive that I've read this before. But why haven't I left a review...? Hmm, another mystery that will never be solved...

Anyway, I always enjoy the dynamics that always occur in any situation where Erk and Serra interact. You've definitely captured that in this story. You know, somehow you always know that Erk would look out for Serra no matter how much he complains about her. The way you portrayed them was, thus, very believable. Umm... My brain's kinda fried right now, so I don't really have anything constructive to say. Sorry? I still loved the story though. Here's a smiley to make everything automatically better: =).

Nice! Erk Serra friendship was really nicely done. and Serra's very IC, so's Erk! yay!!

Another wonderful story by you, I see. Erk/Serra isn't usually my thing (in fact, I generally won't even take a look, I admit), but you pegged this well without any overt needless sappiness. You have a knack for writing in-character. Kudos to you! My only criticism is that the whole thing in italics is a bit unnecessary and it would be easier to read in normal print. But the story itself is very well done. I loved Nino's little cameo in there. Good job!

I've said it before and I'll say it again--you don't get enough reviews. Thus, this little note in your inbox! (Er...even though I've already read this story a bunch...? Am I actually allowed to do this? xD)

Anyways. I think I've you've heard most of what I had to say about this fic...but I see you've certainly changed it from what it was--even though it was subtly, it made a lot of difference. I found the sarcastic jabs of Erk quite funny, and you really pulled off the Erk-Serra team as friends instead of lovers. In my opinion. So congrats. (Total shame about fanfic dot net bunching your words together, though...I hate when it does that...)

very nice.

Wow, I love this!! You kept them right in character! I haven't seen many things that do, even when they're only side characters! I really love how you paraphrased the A support conversation (and you're right, that thing is like, impossible to get) and then went into detail of what happened after it.

I also like how you have those little insights into the character's minds. Oh, and the way that you describe how they act instead of just saying that, for example, Serra is annoying or Erk is thoughtful (because, honestly, what guy that put up with her wouldn't be).

Speaking of description, I think it might be beneficial for you to explain a bit more of the scenery. I mean, not too much, and I might be wrong, but it seems like you've just missed the mark. You know, you have really great descriptions, and are definetly way better about background information than I am, but I still think a few little details would be nice. I don't know though.

There were a few gramatical errors, but when I say a few I do mean litterally a few. I wouldn't have noticed if I hadn't just gotten out of English class. ^^ So overall they weren't distracting; you may just want to fix them to make your piece perfect. ^^

This thing really made me laugh, and smile! I really, really liked it. ^^ I hope you keep writing, because you're awful good at it.

See ya, or not!