Nice job on this one as well. Mihoshi and Kiyone hardly get the respect they derserve (something I am going to remedy one day). I really liked this, and the but with Mihoshi being related to Washu is entirely plausible. I may have all of your stuff read before day break. It rocks.

I have been browsing your stories and this one stuck out! Excellent story especially since this Mihoshi and Kiyone are a bit more sane and I think better than the T/U GP's. I have to tell you that if Tenchi could have only 2 wives I would have Ryoko and Kiyone simply because both are strong in their own right and have a knowledge of tactics from both sides of the law that would only help Tenchi in his many adventures. Hope you do one like that in the future. I want to see your take on it, and I don't want to feel like the only one that likes that pairing in thTenchi Fan fiction Universe. Well anticipating your next story!

dennisud

this was good, and i aprove of the usage of the mihoshi special as well. on to the next one

It was good but I noticed a few mistakes, well only 2! Just a few typeing arrers! :) Yes I heard that! Well I saw it anyways! I still think you changed it too much! :-p :) *Brooke Makibi (I have Kiyone's last name! :):-p)

Good looking story, makes me want to read the other parts. Oh, as for the "walk-on"? Are you referring to Nuku-Nuku?